Talk:I Don't Wanna Be in Love (Keyshia Cole song)/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 06:37, 17 April 2022 (UTC)

You have two articles pending, therefore it is only right that I take one on! --K. Peake 06:37, 17 April 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Remove ref from the infobox since the genre is sourced in the body
 * Make the writing/production sentence the second of the lead instead
 * Remove independent record label introduction because that being solely in the body is sufficient
 * "during Cole and Ashanti's appearances" → "during her and Ashanti's joint appearance" to stop it from sounding like they appeared separately
 * "Greg Edwards and Ron Fair." → "Greg Edwards, and Ron Fair."
 * "A brokenhearted ballad, its lyrics revolve" → "A R&B ballad, "I Don't Wanna Be in Love" revolves" with the pipes
 * "by music critics who complimented its lyrics and instrumental." → "by music critics, who complimented its lyrics and instrumentation." with the pipe
 * "on the US R&B/Hip-Hop Airplay," → "on the Billboard R&B/Hip-Hop Airplay chart," with the pipe
 * "number eleven on the" → "number 11 on the" per MOS:NUM
 * Add a sentence mentioning the audio visualizer after the above one

Background and release

 * "almost three years after the release of her seventh studio album," → "around three years after the release of her seventh studio album"
 * "on her eighth studio album." → "on her eighth album." to avoid overusage of studio album
 * "The song was played as part of the" → "The song was debuted during the"
 * "on January 21, 2020." → "on January 21, 2021."
 * "along with the release date as" → "along with the release date of"
 * "and black sneakers along with" → "and black sneakers, along with"
 * "in the corner of the cover hanging above her symbolizing" → "in the corner dangling above her, symbolizing" to avoid overusage of hang terms
 * "The song was the first release under" → "The song was released for digital download and streaming as the first single under" with the pipes, also add the ref for various releases here
 * Pipe urban contemporary to Urban contemporary music

Composition and lyrics

 * ""I Don't Wanna Be in Love" is" → "Musically, "I Don't Wanna Be in Love" is"
 * Pipe ballad to Sentimental ballad
 * Also mention the piano, bass and synths under instrumentation per Soul Bounce
 * Mention the ad-libs and high notes from Cole per Hip Hop Weekly in a sentence after the above one
 * "written by Cole herself and Brian Bates with production" → "written by Cole and Brian Bates, with production"
 * "Greg Edwards and Ron Fair." → "Greg Edwards, and Fair." plus cite the Tidal credits instead of [12][19] here
 * "The song is about Cole" → "It is about Cole"
 * "a friends with benefits relationship with" → "a friends with benefits relationship, with"
 * "wanna hurt her," confronting" → "wanna hurt her", confronting"
 * "felt that the lyrics were" → "felt that the lyrics are"

Reception

 * Remove excess speech mark after the song's title
 * "received generally positive reviews from music critics." → "was met with generally positive reviews from music critics." with the pipe
 * Use different terminology than "of" at points to be less repetitive for reviewer introductions
 * "described the song as a" → "called "I Don't Wanna Be in Love" a" to be less repetitive
 * Revolt should not be italicised
 * "while Rap-Up found it" → "whereas the staff of Rap-Up found the song to be"
 * Pipe Rap Radar to Elliot Wilson (journalist)
 * "she was "afraid" → "she is "afraid"
 * "it entered US" → "The song entered the US" per no traction being directly sourced
 * "a total of eleven weeks" → "a total of 11 weeks" per MOS:NUM

Track listing

 * Good

Credits and personnel

 * Use so there is the right space between credits and personnel

Weekly charts

 * See MOS:TABLECAPTION

Year-end charts

 * See MOS:TABLECAPTION
 * Wikilink Adult R&B Songs

Release history

 * See MOS:TABLECAPTION
 * Format → Format(s)
 * Label → Label(s)
 * Digital download and streaming need various Apple citations to back this up
 * Pipe Urban contemporary radio to Urban contemporary music

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 08:07, 17 April 2022 (UTC)

, per your directions, I have now fixed the issues. I hope that everything looks fine now. Fullmoon211 (talk) 03:55, 19 April 2022 (UTC)
 * This looks mostly good and I did some copy editing, but you still need to change the second usage of "described the song as a" in the reception section's first sentence per my instructions, author-link Keyshia Cole on her tweet ref and cite SOHH as publisher instead. --K. Peake 07:06, 19 April 2022 (UTC)

Done. Fullmoon211 (talk) 13:24, 19 April 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, good job on implementing everything! --K. Peake 06:54, 20 April 2022 (UTC)