Talk:I Got a Boy (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MrWooHoo (talk · contribs) 18:20, 14 May 2016 (UTC)

I'll start this review ASAP. Just before we begin, to sort out confusion, I will have a general review then an in depth prose and source review. In the general review, I'll use the "GA tools" box. Cheers! MrWooHoo (talk) 18:20, 14 May 2016 (UTC)
 * I've finished all of my comments. Just a couple conformity issues and this will be a pass. MrWooHoo (talk) 18:45, 14 May 2016 (UTC)

General Review

 * Peer reviewer doesn't show anything wrong besides expanding the lead, which I looks all right to me. No disambig links/dead links.

Prose Review
Note: If you have changed the sentence that needed to be corrected, press Enter and start off the line with, then use ✅ or ✅ If the change was only partially done use, and or ❌ if the change could not occur. (If you would explain why, I would be greatly appreciated :P) To see code, go to edit source and copy the code.
 * First sentence in lead: ""I Got a Boy" is the second single from South Korean girl group...";
 * Add "the" in between from and South Korean
 * ❌ — I thought it was still grammatically correct?


 * You are sometimes using the serial comma, and sometimes you aren't.
 * For example, "the group appeared on several South Korean shows in 2013 including Mnet's M! Countdown, KBS' Music Bank, MBC's Music Core, and SBS's Inkigayo." vs "the song is described as a hybrid of various genres including bubblegum pop, dance and electropop." Try and stick to one throughout the whole article.


 * "In the sleepover scene, the girls are seen wearing clothes by UK independent label Lazy Oaf, such as Batman shirt, "fruity" T-shirt and "pizza crewneck.
 * Add the letter "a" before Batman, fruity, and pizza.


 * "the fashion style in the visual was hailed as "a kaleidoscopic streetwear explosion" vs "and the music video itself a "fashion whirlwind ... jam-packed with rad clothes".
 * Either keep "a" in the quotation marks or outside.
 * ✅ — Simon (talk) 08:35, 15 May 2016 (UTC)


 * Charts section has both citations for the position and the name.
 * Keep with conformity and cite on the name/the position only, not both.
 * ✅ — Simon (talk) 08:38, 15 May 2016 (UTC)

Source Review

 * All sources are good. No dead links at all.

Passing now. Good work on this article!