Talk:I Have Questions/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 04:41, 19 February 2018 (UTC)

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 * Grabbing for a review. Aoba47 (talk) 04:41, 19 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Lead and infobox
 * I would paraphrase the "first chapter” quote.
 * For this part (On its release, the song achieved minimal success on charts in Spain, Portugal and France.), I would change “achieved minimal success on charts in” to “charted in” as “minimal success” is more subjective.
 * Background and release
 * I think that an image of Cabello or Fifth Harmony would be helpful here.
 * I disagree, I don't see any real benefit of including a picture in this section, as it already has a quote. I personally think that a picture would make it seems a little bit scattered. –UrbanJE (talk) 12:55, 19 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Please include a short descriptive phrase in front of Cabello.
 * Please spell out the term EP (i.e. extended play) and link it.
 * I am not certain about this part (and a considerable number of singles). I would remove it as the phrase Is rather subjective, specifically the word “considerable”, and reads like a fan wrote it.
 * Please include the year in which 7/27 was released.

✅ ✅
 * Composition and lyrics
 * For this part (While many have thought the song), specify what you mean for “many”.
 * For this part (Singing the second verse, the singer wonders), I would use “Cabello” instead of “singer” to avoid repetition.
 * The song “Everytime” should be in quotations.
 * For this sentence (Rolling Stone's Althea Legaspi wrote she sings with "raw emotion”.), specify that “she” means “Cabello”.
 * Reception
 * I would separate the critical reception and the commercial performance into two separate paragraphs.
 * Yeah, I thought about it but this section is very short, if I separate in two, these subsections would have less than five lines each other so, is better separate in two paragraphs. -UrbanJE (talk) 13:00, 19 February 2018 (UTC)
 * References
 * For Reference 4, the word “exclusive” should not be in all caps.
 * Final comments
 * Wonderful work with this article. Once my comments are addressed, I will pass this. Aoba47 (talk) 06:15, 19 February 2018 (UTC)
 * I have done everything. Thank you again. :) -UrbanJE (talk) 13:00, 19 February 2018 (UTC)


 * Verdict
 * Thank you for addressing everything. I will ✅ this. Aoba47 (talk) 16:22, 19 February 2018 (UTC)