Talk:I Lost a Friend/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Lirim.Z (talk · contribs) 16:19, 17 October 2020 (UTC)

Reviewing this soon.-- Lirim  |  Talk  16:19, 17 October 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * It was released as the second single from the EP on May 3, 2019, through OYOY.
 * the covers need a short alt descriptions (MOS:ALT)
 * Not something you need to do but there is Template:Non-free use rationale album cover which automatically fills all boxes with the required information
 * Finneas O'Connell under songwriters

Background and development

 * this paragraph is a little bit chaotic, which needs to be sorted better
 * I would swap the song's creation information with the release info
 * Finneas wrote
 * This is basically said 4 times in the same paragraph. You should remove this, and put the WBUR quote in it's place
 * explained that the
 * The songs cover art was created by graphic designer Luke and features a beat-up car in a junkyard.

Critical reception

 * "was met with mainly positive reviews"
 * Writing for NME, Will Richards was less positive with the song, saying it "starts as a run-of-the-mill, earnest singer-songwriter tune, but soars towards the end of stabs of distorted bass", comparing it to Billie Eilish's When We All Fall Asleep, Where Do We Go?.

Music video and promotion

 * "was met withpositive reviews"

Other

 * Copy-violation: Very high The genius ref is very high, but because it cites all the refs you also cite in the article; I see no issue

Outcome
'User talk:Lirim.Z, thanks a lot for the review. I have fixed all the issues. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 22:46, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
 * I grant you 7 days to fix these minor issues.-- Lirim  |  Talk  08:59, 26 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Sorry didn't have this on my watchlist. Short comment: Why is "Finneas wrote the song during the afternoon in his parents' house in the summer of 2018." the last sentence of Background and development? -- Lirim  |  Talk  06:37, 28 October 2020 (UTC)

User talk:Lirim.Z, Hi, sorry for the long response. I have decided to retract the nomination, I have been having beef with other editors and I'm thinking they would probably complain about this being GA. I do really appreciate you taking time out of your day to review the article! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 22:28, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
 * ❌ per user wish -- Lirim  |  Talk  02:06, 31 October 2020 (UTC)