Talk:I Love You (Billie Eilish song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 12:19, 15 June 2020 (UTC)

So meet again... check that you respond properly to any feedback during this review. --Kyle Peake (talk) 12:19, 15 June 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Remove the format(s) from the infobox since the song was not released independently
 * WP:OVERLINK of Billie Eilish under Songwriter(s)
 * "co-wrote it, while the latter handled the production" → "co-wrote the song, while the latter handled production"
 * "Eilish's lyrics address several topics" → "Eilish's lyrics on the song address several topics,"
 * There are four reviews of the song in the prose which is enough to show what reception it got; add a sentence about the "received" reviews here and I will tell you afterwards if any fixes are needed
 * "For promotional purposes, the song was" → "For promotional purposes, "I Love You" was" but this should still start the second para
 * "and her Where Do We Go? World Tour in 2020" → "and her 2020 Where Do We Go? World Tour"
 * "When the album When We All Fall Asleep, Where Do We Go? became available" → "When the album was released"
 * "and charted in several countries" → "and charted in several other countries"
 * "and Music Canada (MC)." → "and Music Canada (MC), respectively."

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Background and release

 * Img looks good
 * "was released as the thirteenth track" → "was released as the 13th track"
 * Cite the AllMusic ref here instead
 * ""I Love You" was written" → "The song was written"
 * "her brother, Finneas O'Connell, who also" → "her brother Finneas O'Connell, and he also solely"
 * "by studio personnel, John Greenham" → "by studio personnel John Greenham"
 * "Casey Cuayo is credited as studio personnel and as an" → "Casey Cuayo received credit as studio personnel and an"
 * Sure you can't find any background info, like where the song originated from or how Finneas O'Connell became involved with it?

user:Kyle Peake I can't find any information on where it was created and what the influence for the song was.

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Composition and lyrical interpretation

 * Wikilink tempo to itself and remove link on beats per minute
 * "the key of C Major" → "the key of C major" and fix the wikilink per this too
 * "called it a "dark" song reminiscent" → "called it a "dark" song, reminiscent"
 * "provide "an melancholy" → "provide a "melancholy"
 * "close to an otherwise thrilling album"." → "close" to the album."
 * "Lyrically, Eilish determinedly tries" → "Lyrically, the song features Eilish determinedly trying"
 * "and convinces them they shouldn't either" → "and convincing them they shouldn't love her either"
 * "didn't mean to say "I love you"" → "didn't mean to say 'I love you'" per MOS:QWQ
 * "A faint voice of an airline attendant" → "The faint voice of an airline attendant"
 * "during the second verse. "Up" → "during the second verse, which includes the lyrics: "Up"
 * "favorite songs he and his sister wrote" → "favorite songs he and Eilish wrote"

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 * ❌ for the entire section --Kyle Peake (talk) 05:10, 16 June 2020 (UTC)

Reception and promotion

 * "When it was released, "I Love You" was praised" → ""I Love You" was praised"
 * "and "serene" and felt its lyrics" → "and "serene", and opined that its lyrics"
 * "saw the song as a" → "viewed the song as a"
 * "called the track a" → "called it a"
 * Wikilink Jon Pareles to himself
 * "which, according to him, are a" → "which he described as a"
 * Target to Billboard Hot 100 should be on Billboard Hot 100 instead of just on Hot 100
 * ❌ --Kyle Peake (talk) 05:10, 16 June 2020 (UTC)


 * "the record for the most simultaneous Hot 100" → "the record of most simultaneous Hot 100"
 * "The song also reached modest peaks" → "The song also attained top 100 positions"
 * Any specific order for the countries here?
 * "New Zealand[17] and the Netherlands" → "New Zealand,[17] and the Netherlands" if the order does stay the same
 * "by the Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA) and Music Canada (MC)" → "in the United States and Canada by the Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA) and Music Canada (MC), respectively"
 * "Eilish has promoted "I Love You" through..." remove this unneeded sentence since the entire para is performances
 * "The singer performed the track at" → "Eilish performed the track at the"
 * "on April 20,[21] and at Glastonbury Festival on June 30" → "on April 20, 2019, and later that year at the Glastonbury Festival on June 30"
 * [21][22] should both be solely at the end of the sentence
 * ❌ since you need to add a citation for Coachella too --Kyle Peake (talk) 05:10, 16 June 2020 (UTC)


 * "It was also performed at" → "It was also performed by her at"
 * "It was filmed in" → "The version was filmed in"
 * "the Greek Theatre. The visual shows" → "the Greek Theatre and it shows"
 * "with her brother and producer Finneas as" → "with O'Connell, while" or "with Finneas, while" if you change the introduction of him earlier on to stating "know under his stage name of Finneas"
 * Wikilink acoustic guitar to itself
 * "from thousands of fans’ mobile phones" → "from 1000s of fans' mobile phones"
 * "the sibling's rise slowly above the stage" → "the siblings rise slowly above the stage"
 * "When the track reaches it's conclusion" → "During the conclusion of the track"
 * "the bed is lowered" → "the bed that the two of them sat on is lowered"
 * Wikilink full moon to itself
 * "Eilish performed the song on the season premiere of" → "Eilish appeared on the 45th season premiere of" to avoid repetition, and add the target
 * "of the track with Finneas" → "of the track with O'Connell" but only if you don't add the stage name introduction

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Credits and personnel

 * Use –  so there is the right space between credits and personnel
 * ❌ --Kyle Peake (talk) 05:10, 16 June 2020 (UTC)

Charts

 * Good

Certifications

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * for now, but feel free to ask me if you have any queries! --Kyle Peake (talk) 21:10, 15 June 2020 (UTC)

user:Kyle Peake All of the issues should be fixed! DarklyShadows (talk) 02:24, 16 June 2020 (UTC)
 * I'll plank the not done template on anything you missed. --Kyle Peake (talk) 05:10, 16 June 2020 (UTC)
 * That should be everything. DarklyShadows (talk) 06:52, 16 June 2020 (UTC)
 * You still need to make the proposed ref 33 fix, which is now ref 32 --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:50, 16 June 2020 (UTC)
 * I am talking about the ref on which you have not removed the target to Billie Eilish or targeted Darkroom to Darkroom Records --Kyle Peake (talk) 18:40, 16 June 2020 (UTC)
 * I think I fixed the issue. DarklyShadows (talk) 00:05, 17 June 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ time! --Kyle Peake (talk) 05:15, 17 June 2020 (UTC)