Talk:I Think I Love It/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 16:54, 24 September 2019 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Move the video from links to infobox
 * "is a song recorded by Romanian" → "is a song by Romanian"
 * "digitally released by" → "digitally released through" as there is currently two many close uses of "by"
 * "while production was handled" → "while the production was handled"
 * "track, "I Think I Love It" lyrically discusses" → "track, the song's lyrics discuss"
 * Remove sentence about praise as it's literally only one critic
 * "An accompanying music video..." start a new para at this sentence
 * "directed by Criss Blaziny in Constanța." → "directed by Criss Blaziny." as the location is not notable enough for lead
 * "Making use of several explicit imagery" this reads awkwardly due to no plural, reword
 * ✅ everything apart from the new para suggestion. Paragraphs look really ugly if they're only two or three-line, and that's the case here. I thin it's alright the way it is now.

Background and composition

 * Add a sentence about the chart performance after the one about release
 * This doesn't really fit in here. I think for such articles with really short length, it's alright to only mention one single peak in the lead and in its own "Charts" section.


 * "Alexandra Stan had previously" → "Prior to release, Stan had" as you should only use her full name in the lead and remove WikiLink
 * ""I Think I Love It" served as" → "The song served as"
 * Target Mixing (audio) to Audio mixing (recorded music)
 * "as well as "remind us..." → "as well as reminding "us..." since the latter has correct grammar

Music video and promotion

 * "Stan's YouTube channel" → "Stan's official YouTube channel" as you often refer to them as in articles
 * "Romania and features the guest appearance of" → "Romania, and features a guest appearance from"
 * Is the model's country of birth known?
 * She's probably Romanian, but the source doesn't say it.


 * "Stan—topless underneath" → "Stan topless underneath"
 * "cowboy boots—and Olaru" → "cowboy boots, alongside Olaru"
 * "and to pose in" → "and pose in"
 * "Stan is seen sporting" → "Stan can be seen sporting"
 * Target LED to Light-emitting diode
 * "another large board patterned with bananas and LED border lights in the clip's" → "another large board, patterned with bananas and LED border lights, in the clip's"
 * "Closing the video are" → "The video closes out with"
 * "and noted" → "while he also noted"
 * "Stan also posted" is the word also really needed as it doesn't say that someone else posted first?
 * ""impress[ed] to no end, [...] giving..." → ""impress[ed] to no end", describing her as "giving..."
 * "the singer sang for" → "the singer sang the song for"
 * "Stan has further appeared" → "Stan made further appearances"

Credits and personnel

 * Good

Track listing

 * Good

Charts

 * Good

Release history

 * Territory → Country
 * Add ref to own column

Final comments and verdict

 * for now. Good job on this, just a number of fixes and you're done!
 * I responded to your comments. Thanks for the review! Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:15, 29 September 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ sorry I forgot about this! --Kyle Peake (talk) 11:16, 11 October 2019 (UTC)