Talk:I Want You (Janet Jackson song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: SNUGGUMS (talk · contribs) 01:06, 20 September 2014 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * "It was released April 5, 2004 by Virgin Records"..... add a comma after "2004" per MOS:DATE
 * "blacklist" should link to blacklisting


 * Background
 * The unnamed biography of Kanye doesn't support the quote on Janet Jackson and Jay-Z


 * Critical reception
 * Capitalize the "M" in AllMusic
 * Since the writers at People are more news reporters than media critics, I'm not too sure their review should be included unless the author of the article used is a well-known media critic. It's kind of like using ESPN for politics.
 * New York Post isn't exactly the best of sources, so I'd recommend removing it


 * Music Video
 * Background and synopsis
 * "stated that it wasn't a lot of major wardrobe"..... avoid contractions unless part of a quote or title


 * References
 * FN1: See note in "Critical reception" regarding AllMusic
 * FN6: Publisher is Tribune Company
 * FN8: Publisher is Turner Broadcasting System
 * FN17: "Nielsen Business Media" should link to Nielsen N.V.
 * FN19: Publisher is Channel 4
 * FN25: Publisher is News Corp
 * FN's 47 and 49: Same as FN19
 * FN50: Dead, and I'm not sure it was reliable to begin with
 * FN51: Unlink "Launch.com"
 * FN's 54 and 56: Try to find something better than Fox News


 * GA Result
 * On hold for seven days
 * All ✅. Thanks for the review. Alex talk page! 09:59, 23 September 2014 (UTC)
 * Sure thing, now passing!  Snuggums ( talk  /  edits ) 19:33, 23 September 2014 (UTC)