Talk:I Want You (SB19 song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gained (talk · contribs) 13:38, 10 January 2024 (UTC)

This is my first GA review, I'll try my best not to screw up. Gained (talk) 13:38, 10 January 2024 (UTC)
 * Hi, Gained! Thank you for reviewing the article for GA! I truly appreciate it, especially since it is your first GAN review. I will make sure to address your comments right away; will ping once finished. – Abacusada (t • c) 15:00, 11 January 2024 (UTC)
 * Hi, ! I have put your suggestions into action. Let me know if you have anything else. Once again, thank you! – Abacusada (t • c) 15:40, 11 January 2024 (UTC)
 * Wonderful work Abacusada! Passing... :) Gained (talk) 16:00, 11 January 2024 (UTC)
 * Thank you! – Abacusada (t • c) 10:39, 12 January 2024 (UTC)

Lead

 * "I Want You" (stylized in all uppercase) is a song recorded by the Filipino boy band SB19, taken from their second extended play (EP), Pagtatag!, which was released on June 9, 2023, via Sony Music Philippines. This seems a lot for the first sentence, it should probably be reworded. I also suggest replacing "via" with "by" since it somewhat contradicts the info elaborated in "Background and release"
 * Done: Split into two sentences; the release part is now at the end of the lead paragraph, let me know if that is okay. I will take note "via"/"by" in the future.
 * The image and infobox looks good
 * Reviews from music critics applauded the boy band's ability to cross genres appears to be pretty reasonable for the reviews

Background and release

 * SB19 and record producer August Rigo Include "the" before "record producer"
 * Done
 * Spotcheck on "Sony Music Philippines released the EP on June 9, 2023" – no issues

Composition and lyrics

 * "I Want You" is three minutes and 43 seconds long. This should be written in numbers or spelled out as per MOS:NUMNOTES
 * Done: Fully spelled out
 * The song was written by the song's producer, August Rigo, and the band's leader, Pablo. Repetition of "The song" in close proximity.
 * Done: Replaced the first "The song" with "It"
 * Spot check on two critics of Nylon Manila describing the track as "sensually-themed" — The quote does not seem to appear on both articles
 * Partially removed: Removed "themed" in "sensually-themed"; the "sensual" part is mentioned in both articles

Critical reception

 * The song was met with positive reviews from music critics. seems reasonable for the critical consensus
 * Spotcheck on "Rafael Bautista considered the song an "immersive track" and noted how the song showcased the boy band's raw passion and emotions" — no issues
 * Spotcheck on "The song was nominated for the Wishclusive R&B Performance of the Year award at the Wish 107.5 Music Awards 2024." — no issues

Promotion

 * The image looks good!
 * Spotcheck on "The boy band first performed the song on the noontime variety show ASAP Natin 'To on June 11, 2023" — no issues

Credits and personnel

 * No issues.