Talk:I Will Be (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 17:55, 14 July 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Infobox

 * Genre only includes R&B in infobox, but it lists adult contemporary, pop rock, and contemporary R&B as the genres in the "Composition" section
 * I mean't to remove R&B. No cited by reviewers. You only include a genre in the info box if a reviewer has stated it. Those three draws are what it draws influence from, as noted on Musicnotes.com. Therefore, not reviewers. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One
 * Now there isn't any genre, which is needed by any song article. Rp0211  ( talk2me )
 * Not if there isn't a sourced genre by a reviewer. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One


 * Is there any source to verify that she recorded the song in 2007?
 * The album was released in 2007, and the album booklet has the song in it. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One
 * Noted. Rp0211  ( talk2me )


 * Include locations that song was recorded according to "Production and recording" section
 * Won't the info box be realllllllllllly long though?? Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One
 * You can make it so that it can say something like "See this section" or something to that affect. Rp0211  ( talk2me )
 * Done Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One

Lead

 * It was also co-produced by Steven Wolf and Max Beckley and Smit. → Make it "...Steven Wolf, Max Beckley, and Smit."
 * I think that "Max Beckley and Smit" is his full name, because there is nobody called "Smit" in the booklet. Tb hotch .™ Grammatically incorrect? Correct it!  See terms and conditions.  02:25, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
 * See here. It says "Max Beckley and Smit. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One
 * Noted. Rp0211  ( talk2me )


 * It is a piano and guitar led song, and draws influence from the musical genres of Adult contemporary music, Pop rock and Contemporary R&B. → Change "and draws influence from the music genres of Adult contemporary music, Pop rock and Contemporary R&B" to "and draws influence from adult contemporary, pop rock, and contemporary R&B genres"
 * Done. Tb hotch .™ Grammatically incorrect? Correct it!  See terms and conditions.  02:25, 15 July 2012 (UTC)


 * It garnered a mixed response from music critics; while some praised Lewis' vocal performance and delivery, others described it as emotionless. → Replace semicolon with comma; Replace "while some praised" with "with some critics praising..."; Add "while" in front of "others"
 * Done. Tb hotch .™ Grammatically incorrect? Correct it!  See terms and conditions.  02:25, 15 July 2012 (UTC)

Production and recording

 * Lewis covered the song, and was originally performed by Lavigne..." → Rephrase this sentence to make the prose flow better
 * I think I did it. Tb hotch .™ Grammatically incorrect? Correct it!  See terms and conditions.  02:49, 15 July 2012 (UTC)


 * ...including Conway Recording Studios, Los Angeles, CA; Henson Recording Studios, Hollywood, CA; Dr. Luke's personal recording studio in New York City; Opra Music, Hollywood CA; Ocean Way Recording, Hollywood, CA; Westlake Recording Studios, Los Angeles, CA; Atlantic Studios, Stockholm, Sweden; Sarm West, London, England. → Use commas as it is in a list; List the recording studios like "Conway Recording Studios in Los Angeles, Hensen Recording Studios in Hollywood..."
 * Comma's won't clearly separate them though. You're mean't to use a semi-colon. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One

Composition

 * ...which lasts for a duration of 3:58 (3 minutes, 58 seconds).[7] → Get rid of "3:58" and put "3 minutes, 58 seconds" out of parentheses
 * Already done. Tb hotch .™ Grammatically incorrect? Correct it!  See terms and conditions.  02:49, 15 July 2012 (UTC)


 * It incorporates elements of Adult contemporary music, Pop rock and Contemporary R&B genres.[6] → Change to "elements of adult contemporary, pop rock, and contemporary R&B genres"
 * Already done. Tb hotch .™ Grammatically incorrect? Correct it!  See terms and conditions.  02:49, 15 July 2012 (UTC)

Critical reception

 * Combine this section with the "Composition" section
 * They don't really go together. I made the Critical reception and Chart performance sections sub-sections under a Response section instead, as they go together more and it's more common to do that in articles. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 22:43, 14 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Noted. Rp0211  ( talk2me )

Chart performance

 * No issues

Promotion

 * No issues

Credits and personnel

 * No issues

Charts

 * No issues

Release history

 * No issues