Talk:I Will Never Let You Down/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 11:01, 31 December 2022 (UTC)

I will get on with this today! --K. Peake 11:01, 31 December 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * Mention the release was after Ora teased the song earlier in the month
 * "on the Dance Club Songs" → "on the Dance Club Songs chart"
 * For the top 50 sentence, instead mention the number of other countries it entered this ranking in and add some included to avoid a supermarket list
 * "on 31 March." → "on 31 March 2014."

Background and composition

 * Img looks good!
 * "by uploading the single's cover art" → "uploading the single's cover art"
 * Wikilink music video
 * [5][7][1] shouldn't these be in numerical order?
 * "Her album was scheduled" → "The album was scheduled"
 * "Musically, it is an" → "Musically, "I Will Never Let You Down" is an"
 * The electro-pop genre is not sourced
 * Remove overly obvious wikilink on guitar

Reception

 * "has since received critical acclaim" → "was met with critical acclaim"
 * "start it over again."" → "start it over again"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * Pipe Vulture to Vulture.com per MOS:LINK2SECT
 * "elaborated "if your Monday" → "elaborated, "If your Monday" per the source
 * The two singles aren't directly mentioned by Vox, so add using []
 * "she has definitely found" → "Ora has definitely found" per the source
 * Write "after her 2012 singles" instead, to avoid wasting time writing the year for each one
 * "more than 994,000 units." → "more than 994,000 units in the UK."
 * Remove pipe on topped per WP:OVERLINK
 * "number 5 on the ARIA Singles Chart and reached number 9" → "number five on the ARIA Singles Chart and reached number nine" per MOS:NUM
 * Add the sources for the CHR/Top 40 and Hot AC charts

Promotion

 * Remove wikilink on music video
 * "Taking place in LA," → "Taking place in Los Angeles," because that is obviously what the source means
 * "in a outdoor-setting" → "in an outdoor-setting"
 * Shouldn't you write "the two backup dancers Polly and Sophie Duniam." or something similar since I'm not sure if namely is required
 * "in front of a pink setting as well as in a" → "in front of a pink setting and in a"
 * "as "sweet" and "sexy", writing" → "as "sweet and sexy", writing" since these come directly after each other
 * "off [Ora's] playful side."" → "off [Ora's] playful side"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * "Garibaldi for MTV noted" → "Christina Garibaldi for MTV noted" with the wikilink
 * "vibe of the song."" → "vibe of the song"."
 * "clothes, commenting that "We're" → "clothes, commenting: "We're"
 * "an elegant model."" → "an elegant model"."
 * "On 24 June," → "On 24 June 2014,"
 * Cut down the number of remix artists mentioned to avoid a supermarket list
 * Remove the release year in brackets for the compilation album since the release date is already mentioned in this sentence

Track listing

 * Good

Charts

 * Good

Certifications

 * Good

Release history

 * Format → Format(s)
 * Label → Label(s)

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 13:05, 31 December 2022 (UTC)
 * Hey happy new year and sorry for the late reply. I'm currently very busy with some personal matters and I just wanted to let you know that I will fix all the issues tomorrow. Iaof2017 (talk) 13:39, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
 * That is good, I look forward to seeing that today and I hope with all my heart you are alright. --K. Peake 07:43, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Thank you a lot, really appreciate it. I was/am really busy with university stuff and so on. Anyway, everything should be addressed now and thanks for the review. :D Iaof2017 (talk) 00:03, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, good job and it's within the week target for GAs! --K. Peake 08:54, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Great. :) Iaof2017 (talk) 12:13, 6 January 2023 (UTC)