Talk:I Won't Say (I'm in Love)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 03:37, 6 June 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

 * You can remove the following unnecessary infobox parameters:
 * "Cover"
 * "Alt"
 * "Caption"
 * Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 00:04, 15 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Unlink "Alan Menken" from the "Producer" parameter since you already linked him above in the "Writer" parameter
 * Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 00:05, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Paragraph 1

 * Since Cheryl Freeman is the only other credited musician as the artist(s) of the song, I would list her first after "while singers..."
 * Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 00:08, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Paragraph 2

 * The correct wording is "Motown", not "Mowtown"
 * Done. Can't believe I made that mistake hahahaha, how embarrassing.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:59, 16 June 2016 (UTC)

Paragraph 3

 * Link "music critics" to the article "Music journalism" please
 * Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:59, 16 June 2016 (UTC)

Paragraph 1

 * Remove the extra space after "literal" please
 * Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:59, 16 June 2016 (UTC)


 * That last sentence is way long; perhaps you could remove "featuring lyrics that Meg herself would never have sung," for the same effect?
 * Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:59, 16 June 2016 (UTC)

Paragraph 2

 * Again, since Cheryl Freeman is the only other credited musician as the artist(s) of the song, I would list her first after "Familiar with..."
 * Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:59, 16 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Add "musicians" after "Familiar with" please
 * Done, but substituted "musicians" for "singers"; hope that's okay.

Paragraph 3

 * American English: Change "realisation" --> "realization"
 * Done.

Paragraph 2

 * The link to "Parody" through "parodies" is unnecessary; please remove it
 * Done, removed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:59, 16 June 2016 (UTC)

Reception

 * Link "music critics" and "film critics" here in the lead sentence please to the aforementioned articles
 * Done.


 * Irving Tan's review is very, very long; please trim here and there
 * Done; removed "which has gotten uncomfortably crass and increasingly unsubtle over the years" and "for that swooning female friend in your life..."


 * Since the list listed also acts as the title, it would be correct to capitalize the statement as "The Best Ever Disney Songs"
 * Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:59, 16 June 2016 (UTC)

Cover versions

 * All good! Great work
 * Thanks!

End of GA Review:
Very well-written articles with minor issues. Seven days for changes to be made ("on hold"); good luck! Thanks! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 22:15, 14 June 2016 (UTC).
 * I think I've covered just about everything! Awaiting your verdict :-)--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:59, 16 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Great work. Thanks again! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 21:24, 16 June 2016 (UTC).