Talk:I går såg jag ditt barn, min Fröja/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 08:09, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

Will do soon. AryKun (talk) 08:09, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:26, 25 January 2022 (UTC)


 * "best-known and best-loved songs" → This seems like an exceptional claim and isn't mentioned in the body.
 * Reworded.
 * "based on a real event" → This is also not mentioned in the body.
 * Added.
 * Link epistle.
 * One of Fredman's Epistles, already linked.
 * I meant a general link to what an epistle is.
 * "Swedish song tradition" → Maybe just write "Swedish ballad tradition", as ballad and song aren't exact synonyms.
 * Done.
 * "influence in Swedish music" → "influence on Swedish music"?
 * Link epistle.
 * See above.
 * Link pastorales.
 * Done.
 * "post-baroque" → Shouldn't Baroque be capitalized? Also link.
 * Done.
 * Link burlesque.
 * Done.
 * Link timbres.
 * The link is something else; I've added a gloss.
 * "Gamla stan" → Since this is a proper noun, is the italicization necessary?
 * Removed.
 * Is "(song starts at 23:00)" needed in the external link, since it's a recording?
 * It'll certainly help readers as the place in the concert isn't at all obvious.
 * All the references seem reliable and are properly formatted, although as they are all books/in Swedish, I can not verify them. AryKun (talk) 09:31, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:40, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Just a sorta note: The article about the lady Ulla was based on states that she was arrested for wearing silk, so that might need to be checked out. AryKun (talk) 10:38, 25 January 2022 (UTC)