Talk:Iain Lonie

Nice work
That's a very nice bio. Good work! The only thing that stopped me assessing it as B-class is that the lead section is inadequate. See MOS:INTRO. Please ping me if/when it's been amended.  Schwede 66  17:31, 31 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Cheers, thanks very much! I've had a look at the MOS & some similar articles, and given it a go; please do let me know if it can be improved. Chocmilk03 (talk) 17:03, 4 November 2020 (UTC)