Talk:Ian Campbell (Canadian politician)

Chronological
After my separation of the lead from the rest of the article, can you please develop the article more chronologically? The sentence "In May 2018, Campbell announced that he intended to run for Mayor of Vancouver in the 2018 municipal election. He was later confirmed as the Vision Vancouver candidate." can stay at the lead as well as in the bottom of the article, as it's very important, but should not stay in the beginning, as it's not chronological. I don't want to put my hands too much, as I feel like you may interpret the sources better than I can. --1l2l3k (talk) 15:16, 21 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Agreed. I wanted to flush out the article with some more facts about him and his career as Chief, but it does seem it needs to be reordered and smoothed out so it reads better. I will take a stab at this when I have some time.  Of course, I do not own the article, so if you or anyone else wants to take a stab at it, go for it! :)--Darryl Kerrigan (talk) 17:32, 21 August 2018 (UTC)
 * It's currently very proselist-y with several one-sentence paragraphs which would be good to avoid. —Joeyconnick (talk) 18:32, 21 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Agreed. I think it needs to be filled out and perhaps divided into his first and second terms in office.--Darryl Kerrigan (talk) 19:25, 21 August 2018 (UTC)

When was he first elected Chief?
If someone has the time, we should get the dates he was first elected/became chief and when he was re-elected.--Darryl Kerrigan (talk) 17:58, 21 August 2018 (UTC)