Talk:Ian Johnstone (broadcaster)

Suggested edits
Hi User:ArleneHerman. Thanks for creating this article. Some suggestions: remove the headings that exist, and just have them all under a Biography heading. When an article is this small, it doesn't read well to have lots of small section. There are also some superfluous information that don't really fit within the neutral tone for biographies of living persons. I'm happy to make these edits for you, if you'd like? Nauseous Man (talk) 08:53, 3 August 2021 (UTC)
 * there we are. Nauseous Man (talk) 09:08, 3 August 2021 (UTC)

Hello, yes if you can go through and make changes to help with this that would be great. Thank you very much! --ArleneHerman (talk) 09:12, 3 August 2021 (UTC)