Talk:Iana Kasian

Contested deletion
This article should not be speedily deleted for lack of asserted importance because the person and her death has attained major notability. -- Mardus /talk 02:20, 26 September 2017 (UTC)
 * By the way, I'm not the creator of this article, so it should be possible for me to remove the speedy deletion notice. - Mardus /talk 02:24, 26 September 2017 (UTC)

Contested deletion
This article should not be speedily deleted for lack of asserted importance because... I am in mid-creation and still adding to this new page, so please don't jump the gun. Significance is that her murder "may be the most gruesome murder in the history of West Hollywood if not Los Angeles." Potent history. http://www.wehoville.com/2017/09/17/wehos-holloway-drive-scene-gruesome-murder-l-history/ The article is being tagged for deletion while I try to add significant details. --AHampton (talk) 02:23, 26 September 2017 (UTC)

Time between death and now?
Since Kasian died about one and a half years ago, then what took so long for news about her death to reach the media? - Mardus /talk 03:03, 26 September 2017 (UTC)

Ways to improve the article

 * Avoid using the name of the daughter more than once; it does not relate to the victim's death, and the child is underage.
 * Avoid using repetition of words, like 'grisly' and 'gruesome'. This is a term used by the media, and these can be used only in single quotes to point out, that someone else used these words. It can be said, that
 * the news media branded the murder as `grisly,´
 * but the article itself cannot state this as fact. - Mardus /talk 03:36, 26 September 2017 (UTC)