Talk:Ice Cream Freeze (Let's Chill)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: -- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  17:02, 26 May 2010 (UTC)

{{GAList2 }} -- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  17:02, 26 May 2010 (UTC)
 * overcom=This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
 * 1a=???
 * 1acom= In the Background section, "'Ice Cream Freeze (Let's Chill}' has a corresponding dance moves designed by Jamal Sims", this sentence doesn't make sense. Do you mean ---> "'Ice Cream Freeze (Let's Chill)' has corresponding dance moves designed by Jamal Sims" or something like that?
 * Check.
 * 1b=???
 * 1bcom= In the lead and throughout the article, example "It was released on June 30, 2009 by Walt Disney Records as a promotional single" commas after dates, if using MDY. In the Background section, "'Ice Cream Freeze (Let's Chill}'" ---> "'Ice Cream Freeze (Let's Chill)'".
 * I don't understand the first part about the commas. As for the title, it is fixed. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 05:15, 27 May 2010 (UTC)
 * I got it and check.
 * 2a=?
 * 2acom=Reference 3 has a different url link path, so you might want to update that.
 * I don't understand. I clicked the link and it sends me to the page directly. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 05:17, 27 May 2010 (UTC)
 * It does send you to the page, but the url link has changed, and check.
 * 2b=y
 * 2c=y
 * 3a=y
 * 3b=y
 * 4=y
 * 5=y
 * 6a=y
 * 6b=y
 * 7=???
 * 7com=Not that much to do. If the statements above can be answered, I will pass the article. Good luck with improving this article!
 * Thank you to Ipodnano for getting the stuff I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) -- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  16:10, 27 May 2010 (UTC)