Talk:Ico/GA1

GA Review
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This looks like a very good article. You do a good job of orienting the reader who is not a game player (me). I will make some comments now and make more later if I see the need. I don't see any major problems. &mdash; Mattisse (Talk) 03:42, 14 November 2008 (UTC)
 * All titles in the footnotes should be sentence capitalization. No all capes.
 * There are some prose issue (issues in wording). I can either try to fix them myself or list them here, or a combination, whatever you prefer. Let me know what you want.
 * That's all I see for now (but I am tired!)


 * Save for the "ICO"/"NICO" titles, I fixed the other all-caps sections. Feel free to review the text yourself, any copyedit help is appreciated. --M ASEM  15:24, 14 November 2008 (UTC)

 Final GA review (see here for criteria)
 * I am not sure what this sentence means: "These actions are complicated by the fact that only Ico is able to do these steps" - What steps? &mdash; Mattisse  (Talk) 22:30, 14 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Changed to "perform these actions". --M ASEM 00:08, 15 November 2008 (UTC)
 * I did a little copy editing, hopefully OK. Other than the sentence above, which is not a big deal, everything looks great. &mdash; Mattisse  (Talk) 23:02, 14 November 2008 (UTC)

Excellent job! &mdash; Mattisse (Talk) 00:34, 15 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): Very clearly written, so a non-game player like me can understand it. b (MoS): No apparent MoS violations
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): Well referenced b (citations to reliable sources): Sources are reliable  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): Sets the context b (focused): Remains focused on article subject
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias: Neutral
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail: