Talk:If We Are the Body/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: 0z (talk · contribs) 10:24, 1 October 2012 (UTC)

General

 * Theres one dead link
 * Replaced the link.  Toa   Nidhiki05  19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)

Infobox

 * Is there a single cover?
 * Not that I could find, no. It is a bit unusual, but I don't think there was one.
 * July 23, 2003 > July 26, 2003
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Mention the studios and locations in Recorded
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)

Lead

 * Mention the song's release date and record label
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Link music critics
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)

Background and recording

 * The album was > The song was
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)

Composition

 * Remove According to the sheet music published by Musicnotes.com, → Not needed
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
 * You say "the song" a lot here. Replace some of them with "If We Are the Body" or "it"
 * Cut down total from 20 to 11.  Toa   Nidhiki05  19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Link chorus
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)

Critical reception and accolades

 * Link music critics
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Remove Mark Hall link. You've already linked the name in Background and recording.
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)

Chart performance

 * Remove self-titled debut album link
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)

Live performances

 * Link set list
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Casting performed > Casting Crowns performed
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
 * setlist > set list
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

 * No issues

Charts

 * No issues

Release and radio history

 * No issues

Summary
Great work! Article is well written. On hold for 7 days. — Oz  (talk)   11:53, 3 October 2012 (UTC)
 * I fixed the issues.  Toa   Nidhiki05  19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Passed. — Oz  (talk)   20:51, 4 October 2012 (UTC)