Talk:Iggy SZN/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: 23W (talk · contribs) 07:19, 27 January 2015 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Is "iTunes Stores" supposed to be plural in the first section? If not, there needs to be an article (the) preceding it.
 * It is plural. HĐ (talk) 12:48, 29 January 2015 (UTC)
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Is "iTunes Stores" supposed to be plural in the first section? If not, there needs to be an article (the) preceding it.
 * It is plural. HĐ (talk) 12:48, 29 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Is "iTunes Stores" supposed to be plural in the first section? If not, there needs to be an article (the) preceding it.
 * It is plural. HĐ (talk) 12:48, 29 January 2015 (UTC)


 * "Until I l get what I want": what's with the rogue l? I couldn't dictate it in the song; it might be a misprint in the secondary sources.
 * Yup, it is a misprint. Fixed it per MetroLyrics. HĐ (talk) 12:48, 29 January 2015 (UTC)


 * Quotations within quotations need to be replaced with single quote marks (') in the Farber quotation (MOS:QWQ).
 * Done. HĐ (talk) 12:48, 29 January 2015 (UTC)


 * There's a citation error in the third reference:
 * Fixed. HĐ (talk) 12:48, 29 January 2015 (UTC)


 * "nydailynews.com", "idolator.com", and "state.ie" should be replaced with the titles of the sites and not the base URLs.
 * Done. HĐ (talk) 12:48, 29 January 2015 (UTC)


 * The YouTube external link is dead; is there a replacement?
 * I'm quite sure that Iggy Azalea withdrawn it. There are currently no copyrighted audios of the song on YouTube, so I have removed it. HĐ (talk) 12:48, 29 January 2015 (UTC)


 * The em dashes in the reception section should be converted to en dashes or the surrounding spaces removed (MOS:EMDASH).
 * Done. HĐ (talk) 12:48, 29 January 2015 (UTC)


 * Any possible images?
 * Iggy hasn't performed the song yet, so there are no available images. HĐ (talk) 12:48, 29 January 2015 (UTC)

That's all I got. Nice and simple article. I made these two copy edits, fixing mostly trivial things. On hold for 14 days. 23W 03:33, 29 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much for your review! HĐ (talk) 12:48, 29 January 2015 (UTC)
 * You're welcome. I saw that the dashes and quotes weren't quite fixed to MoS standards, so I corrected them myself. Passing. 23W 02:12, 30 January 2015 (UTC)