Talk:Ignacy Potocki/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 23:59, 17 June 2013 (UTC)

This article has languished long enough. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 23:59, 17 June 2013 (UTC)

Infobox and lead
Fine here.

Life
"...(Komisja Edukacji Narodowej)– the world's first ministry of education – he was.." Proper spacing in accordance with the hyphens. In the first paragraph of the "Political career" section, you start a sentence with "In 1781...". In the second paragraph, you start a sentence with "On 29 May 1773...". Why the chronologic disparity?
 * Because the paras here are topic specific; the first one discusses his involvement with educational initiatives. The chronology here is secondary to theme. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 17:15, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

"...office of the Writer of Lithuania..." Was he a scribe then? Either way, please elucidate.
 * Linked to offices of the Polish-Lithuanian Commonwealth, in lieu of stubbing a rather low-key pl:Pisarz wielki litewski.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 17:15, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

"...a nickname bakałarz." Please write as "...a nickname: bakałarz." Also, what does this nickname mean? You already wikilinked Familia in the first section.
 * Added an explanation. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 17:15, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

"...with Russia attitude..." "...with the Russian attitude...", maybe?
 * Clarified. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 17:15, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

"...of a Minister of War." No need for "a". "...even after Poniatowski's access to it." Access isn't the correct word, maybe accession? That is all.
 * Done all marked plus minor. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 17:15, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

Remembrance
This is as miniscule a section as any, but the content affords its own section nonetheless.

Conslucion
Very fine article. Once everything has been addressed and allayed, I will pass this article. Excellent work and congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 01:03, 25 June 2013 (UTC)