Talk:Illinois v. Hemi Group LLC/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Lixxx235 (talk · contribs) 21:12, 4 August 2014 (UTC)

Planing to review, "claiming". Thanks, and cheers,  Lixxx235 - Talk 21:12, 4 August 2014 (UTC)

TheQ Editor's Comment
Hey, just stopping by after I clicked the wrong link on my watchlist. Here's some problems on first glance.


 * Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.


 * Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”.

That's basically it. Those are some major problems on first glance. Cheers,  TheQ Editor     (Talk) 23:07, 4 August 2014 (UTC)

Reviewer's comment
Pass. Cheers and Thanks,  L235 - Talk Ping when replying 17:18, 15 August 2014 (UTC)