Talk:Imagined contact hypothesis

Kinkreet

 * I approved it because it is a good enough article, and I can see a lot of effort was put into its creation, which is appreciated. However, there are still the problem of style - it is written like an essay. Maybe a rewording using more of your own words will make this better? Also a lead needs to be written to summarize the whole topic, this might even just be a condensed form of your first section. For more help see MOS:LEAD Thanks for your contribution, and good luck! Kinkreet (talk) 02:42, 16 February 2012 (UTC)