Talk:Imelda (film)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:47, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Comments A few issues, so this is on hold for a week. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:33, 9 March 2014 (UTC)
 * Lead is weak, it doesn't describe the film really at all, and heads straight for reviewers' comments.
 * " $200,000 at the US box office with an additional US$300,000" you link the second US$ but just have an unlinked $ the first time.
 * "It holds very favourable" It received...
 * You link Marcos but not First Lady in the lead but then you link First Lady and not Marcos in the opening paragraph of the Synopsis section.
 * "her whirlwind romance" reads like a tabloid.
 * We have an article on Human rights in the Philippines you could link to.
 * "met Douglas MacArthur during" perhaps just add "General" in here so we can better put this meeting into context.
 * "why she got the lyrics wrong" -> "why she sang the lyrics incorrectly"
 * "Imelda in 2006." any reason why this shouldn't be "Marcos in 2006"?
 * "The film had its world premiere" ->" The film's world premiere..."
 * "and had its North American premiere" ->"while its North American premiere was..."
 * "within Maryland Film " -> "at the Maryland..."
 * Our article on Film Threat italicises the title.
 * "San Francisco Chronicle said " -> "The San Francisco Chronicle said "
 * It appears that Spiderman 2 is actually called "Spider-Man 2".
 * References could use filling out, e.g. adding retrieval dates and publication dates where appropriate, see WP:CITESTYLE.
 * "Comedy film" is a category, is this serious?
 * Fixed most of them.-- ♥  14:53, 11 March 2014 (UTC)
 * When do you plan to fix the rest of them? The Rambling Man (talk) 14:59, 11 March 2014 (UTC)
 * *Actually, I have fixed all of them. the only thing I disagree with is using her last name versus her first. The use of her first name is widely used in many publications and I think that's fine based on mononym, Leonardo da Vinci, and WP:PRIMARYTOPIC.-- ♥ (Theparties) 09:52, 13 March 2014 (UTC)
 * &Fine. I'll fix it.-- ♥ (Theparties) 09:52, 13 March 2014 (UTC)