Talk:Impact of the COVID-19 pandemic on foster care in the United States

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Hi Captain.Chatterbox! I've filled out the peer review form for this article. Overall, good work! I look forward to seeing what improvements you'll make to this article. Eta Cas (talk) 02:13, 13 May 2020 (UTC)

Great work on this article - it's clearly close to your heart. You'll want to check your CANVAS inbox for a suggestion regarding the intro. Great job! Bridges2Information (talk) 00:14, 15 May 2020 (UTC)

My only suggestion is to create a reference header. Overall, great job! Parkde (talk) 00:57, 15 May 2020 (UTC)

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 31 March 2020 and 7 June 2020. Further details are available on the course page.

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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 19 January 2021 and 7 May 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Kjoithomas. Peer reviewers: Alicemarron.

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Neutrality/style of the article
This article reads like an opinion piece, and if the above talk page message is accurate, there may have been a bias driving the article's creation. I do not deny the notability of this topic, for it's clear there's a trove of third-party sources that have covered this. However, I strongly believe this article needs a polishing from head to toe so it can adhere to WP:NPOV. If not, I'm going to have to look into which COVID-19 article this topic can be successfully merged into. I'm not too well-versed with the foster care in the U.S., so I'm open to suggestions on improvements. Love of Corey (talk) 11:11, 7 July 2020 (UTC)

Suggestions
Hello! I noticed that you mentioned LA County shutting down non-essential businesses. From what dates did this occur and is it still happening right now? Since the pandemic is ongoing, I think adding the dates would be helpful to create a better timeline and make the article more cohesive. Good start! Vanchu22 (talk) 20:02, 3 September 2020 (UTC)