Talk:Impeachment March/Archive 1

List of cities
Like Not My Presidents Day, I am creating a list of cities with participating marches and other activities, so we can divide and conquer expanding the article:


 * Amarillo, Texas ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 20:05, 22 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Ann Arbor, Michigan ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 20:20, 22 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Atlanta ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 20:59, 22 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Austin, Texas ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 22:34, 22 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Buffalo, New York ✅ --- Most sources are blogs. We have 2 RS on the page now. Megalibrarygirl (talk) 18:27, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Chicago ✅ If there are other sources, they're behind paywalls &/or I'm not hitting them. Megalibrarygirl (talk) 22:08, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Cleveland ✅ I'm not finding more details to add. This source mentions where the protest was planned to take place, but I'm not sure this website is considered a reliable source, and I'd rather see the location confirmed in a post-event source. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 19:00, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Davenport, Iowa ✅ added more info. Seems good. Megalibrarygirl (talk) 19:21, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Denver ✅ Megalibrarygirl (talk) 20:02, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Detroit ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 21:45, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Escondido ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 21:55, 23 July 2017 (UTC)


 * Las Vegas? (see this passing mention)
 * Would you mind doing a quick search for Vegas and confirming that there are really no other sources mentioning this city? Since I can only find this one passing mention, I'm inclined to not include mention of the city in any capacity within the article's prose. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 22:20, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 * I'm inclined to treat Las Vegas like Phoenix for this article. Phoenix is another place I found "name-dropped" and while they planned to have a march, I suspect it was too hot to hold the march in both locations. Megalibrarygirl (talk) 22:28, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Meaning, let's not mention either city? --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 22:29, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I think so. I think news sources pulled the info from the website, not from other news sources. But I'm entering the area of speculation here. All I know is that I tried and failed to find anything in Nevada or Arizona. Neither for New Mexico, for that matter, but there were cities listed for those states on the website and social media. :( Megalibrarygirl (talk) 22:32, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 * OK. This source mentions the planned location for the Phoenix protest, which did take place according to the Facebook event page. But given such limited coverage, I'm fine with not including. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 22:33, 23 July 2017 (UTC)


 * Los Angeles ✅, well covered. Megalibrarygirl (talk) 22:17, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 * New Orleans ✅ I'm not finding much more about New Orleans, so marking this as done. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 18:55, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 * New York City ✅ Nothing new. No NY Times, either. Megalibrarygirl (talk) 22:15, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Palm Beach, Florida ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 22:18, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Philadelphia ✅, coverage in article v. Good. Megalibrarygirl (talk) 20:02, 23 July 2017 (UTC)


 * Portland, Oregon (Note: The planned protest was cancelled, but why? More information needed, or at least we should see if there's anything else worth mentioning in the article.)
 * ❌ Rapid City, per this source?
 * Sacramento ✅ most of the coverage is already in article. Megalibrarygirl (talk) 19:38, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 * San Diego ✅ also well covered. Megalibrarygirl (talk) 22:17, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 * San Francisco
 * Santa Ana, California ✅ Can't find any more details to add. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 21:59, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Seattle ✅ Not finding much more for Seattle. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 22:11, 23 July 2017 (UTC)

Feel free to help expand, or check off an entry from the list if you've completed research and added as much content as appropriate about the city to the article. Pinging in case you are interested. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 22:23, 13 July 2017 (UTC)
 * I'm on it, . :) Megalibrarygirl (talk) 22:28, 13 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Sweet! I am working on the map at the moment. I have some work obligations the next few days, but I'd love to work together on this article and do another Good article co-nom, if you're interested. No pressure, or rush. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 22:29, 13 July 2017 (UTC)

I suggest we start making the content alphabetical by city, like we did for Not My Presidents Day, and create subsections if needed (possibly California?) --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 22:37, 13 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Seems the article somehow duplicated itself, perhaps as the result of an edit conflict. Can you decide which half you want to keep (I assume the second half)? --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 23:36, 13 July 2017 (UTC)
 * , I think I may have caused the problem. Sorry and I apologize for the slow reply. I'll be updating the article more tomorrow, hopefully. Today was a clean the house and go to meetings day. (mostly) Megalibrarygirl (talk) 04:45, 15 July 2017 (UTC)

Update: All of the cities listed above have been added to the map, which now appears in the article. I've left the bulleted list to serve as a checklist for confirming which cities we've fully researched. This is a similar approach User:Megalibrarygirl and I used for the Not My Presidents Day article, which worked well. Feel free to check off an entry once all details for that location have been incorporated into the article, or expand the list if addition city names emerge. Thanks! --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 17:56, 22 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Things sure are coming along nicely! I count just 8 cities left to research, then I'm happy to request a copy edit from the Guild of Copy Editors and co-nominate for Good article status, unless you object for any reason. Thanks so much for your work on this article! --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 22:01, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 * that sounds awesome. I'll see what else I can dig up for the remaining cities, though I suspect we may have most of it covered. Megalibrarygirl (talk) 22:04, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Indeed, I think we're in a very good position here in terms of completeness, but I appreciate your willingness to double check for each city with me. Teamwork! :) --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 22:06, 23 July 2017 (UTC)

With just 2 cities left, I've requested a copy edit, which will hopefully be completed sooner than later. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 22:36, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Just a quick update: I am still plugging in some inline citations, but went ahead and nominated the article for Good status. The banner at the top of the article is making at least one GOCE member hestitant to review the article. Hopefully the banner will be removed soon. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 14:49, 25 July 2017 (UTC)
 * thanks for the update! Megalibrarygirl (talk) 01:49, 26 July 2017 (UTC)

Las Vegas
Hi guys! Great work on this! As an FYI, the Vegas July 2 event happened: Their FB page (https://www.facebook.com/events/1811304489198206) displays pix and a video (apparently at the downtown rally) in the feed, which also shows at least one pic and some discussion about a small counter-protest contingent. Jetpower (talk) 01:21, 21 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks! Are you aware of any secondary coverage (such as newspaper articles)? Facebook is not considered reliable sourcing. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 01:23, 21 December 2017 (UTC)

Excessive detail tag
I removed the excessive detail tag. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 19:14, 15 July 2017 (UTC)
 * And I restored. Given that merger discussion is leaning towards merger, this article has too much trivia and violates WP:NOTNEWS. 20 of the 24 references are from news-stories dated 2/3 July. – S. Rich (talk) 20:12, 15 July 2017 (UTC)
 * If there are excessive details, then just remove them or discuss them here. I don't think the tag is needed. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 20:18, 15 July 2017 (UTC)
 * I may. But I don't want my editing effort to be seen as contentious or disruptive. Let's see how the merger discussion shakes out, and then trim the info. – S. Rich (talk) 20:39, 15 July 2017 (UTC)
 * But the tag may influence the ongoing discussion, imo. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 20:40, 15 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Perhaps, but I think the commenting editors are savy enough to figure out what they think is best for WP. – S. Rich (talk) 20:44, 15 July 2017 (UTC)

Do either of you think this tag is necessary? I don't especially when a specific reason is not given. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 01:56, 18 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Actually, I see Funcrunch already removed the tag. I agree 100%, and since Srich32977 is not giving specific reasoning, I am removing the tag again as I continue to expand the article. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 02:37, 18 July 2017 (UTC)
 * I did not remove the tag; you misread the diff. I didn't think the tag was particularly necessary, but didn't feel strongly enough about it to remove it. Funcrunch (talk) 03:41, 18 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Ah! My apologies. Sorry for the misunderstanding here, but I'm not adding the tag back because I still think Srich needs to be willing to edit the article to address their concerns or be willing to provide a more specific explanation for the tag's inclusion. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 14:25, 18 July 2017 (UTC)
 * the level of detail is no different from other country-wide events that we've worked on, including one that went to GA status. Megalibrarygirl (talk) 19:14, 18 July 2017 (UTC)

Atlanta
Please review the sourcing to understand why the Wikipedia article currently says what it does, and not what you're saying. Can you providing sources to verify your claim? --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 02:48, 21 December 2017 (UTC)

Here are a few sources to clarify the details of our march. http://www.11alive.com/mobile/article/news/politics/hundreds-attend-trump-impeachment-five-mile-march-through-atlanta/85-409534109 — Preceding unsigned comment added by DanaNoir33 (talk • contribs) 06:52, 23 December 2017 (UTC)
 * This article is about the Not My Presidents Day demonstration. The Impeachment March was held in July 2017. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 06:57, 23 December 2017 (UTC)