Talk:In Your Eyes (Inna song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 22:18, 3 July 2017 (UTC)

Infobox
✅
 * Something is wrong with the flatlist, you are missing something in the songwriter(s) section.

Lead

 * Fine.

Background and release
✅
 * Remove "both"
 * "are played" → were played. It should be on the same tense.

Composition and reception
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 * "alert" → what do you mean? Fast pace rhythm?
 * "found "In Your Eyes" was the catchiest" → believed that "In Your Eyes" was the catchiest track from Party Never Ends
 * although "never mind the silly bit overdubbed in the chorus" → although he found the chorus to have a "silly bit overdubbed"
 * "Commercially, the track experienced minor success on record charts." → Commercially, the track debuted...
 * Only one source for the peak? Did he talk on the podcast about when it entered the song?

Music video
✅.
 * "This and other aspects led to the visual being likened to Rihanna's clip for "Pour It Up"" → This and other aspects led its visual being likened to Rihanna's "Pour It Up"
 * Remove the links from the image as well.

Live performances
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 * and performed the song. → while performing the song.
 * "interpreting a cover version of Justin Bieber's "Love Yourself" (2015) and a stripped-down version of "Endless" (2011)" → not relevant
 * "Inna also opened the Untold Festival in 2016." → same as previous

Track listing

 * Good idea.

Credits and personnel
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 * "Rokstone Studios – recording studio" → Above in a sentence like "Recorded at Rokstone Studios, London, United Kingdom"

Charts
{{Done}}
 * The Turkish source is not taking me there directly, seems to be an error with "{{" → fix the issue

Release history
✅
 * Please use this source for radio airplay it has the label.

Overall GA review

 * Address minor issues. On hold for seven days. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:22, 4 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much for the review. I have done everything besides:


 * Yes, there is only one source for the peaks in Romania. The source is a list of podcasts; seeing the dates "In Your Eyes" reached no X or Y, the readers can select the respective podcast.
 * How do they know that? Wouldn't it be easier for you to add here the actual podcast as well or use a quote saying which one is for the peak on the debut on the chart?


 * 1) I think the fact that she sang those two songs at her concert in Mexico is a little bit relevant for the context of the event. Also, it expands the "LIve performances" section a little bit.
 * That can't be the only aim, the article is not regarding that concert only the performance of that song and should stay that away.
 * please reply. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:45, 4 July 2017 (UTC)

Thanks again, Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:15, 4 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Done both points + the issue with the thumbnail. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 04:59, 5 July 2017 (UTC)