Talk:In the Zone/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: CallMe Nathan   &bull;  Talk2Me   01:34, 7 March 2011 (UTC)

Lead

 * However, she started -> why however? She did in fact stop for 6 months. July to November ✅
 * Others criticized -> others however, criticized ✅
 * I won't hold it against you but you know I hate that 6 million thing
 * lol, sorry!
 * "Me Against the Music" and "Toxic" became worldwide hits, and "Everytime" peaked at number one in Australia and the United Kingdom -> change. Also it doesn't make such sense. "Everytime" was just as successful if not more so than MATM ✅
 * live appearances -> television ✅

Background and development

 * 4 million copies only in the United States -> take out only ✅
 * However, she revealed in November 2002 that she had started working on her next studio album -> again, that was six months later ✅
 * Spears's -> Spears' ✅

Recording

 * Shine was written by Timberlake or Spears? ✅
 * been a Madonna fan -> a fan of Madonna ✅

Composition

 * Great!

Critical reception

 * Nice

Chart performance

 * In the Zone sold 609,000 copies in the United States in its first week -> sold 609,000 during its first week of availability in the United States ✅
 * In the Zone debuted at number thirteen on the UK Albums Chart, where it stayed for forty-three weeks. -> sounds like it stayed at #13 for that long. Re-word ✅

Singles

 * According to MOS, I believe each single should not have its own paragraph. Bunch it like a regular section. ✅

Promotion

 * sued for trademark infringement -> why?
 * added that it was for 'in the zone'. ✅

Legacy

 * while Aguilera "comes across like a natural-born skank -> lol, I love this :)
 * Nice


 * Overall great job! You are really improving, I really had a breeze reading through it. Great work :)-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   05:13, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks so much! Xwomanizerx (talk) 10:32, 11 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Passing :)-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   09:52, 13 March 2011 (UTC)