Talk:Indian Institute of Management Lucknow/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TheSpecialUser (talk · contribs) 15:30, 20 September 2012 (UTC)

Happy to help.  TheSpecialUser TSU 15:30, 20 September 2012 (UTC)


 * I will be available anytime to respond. -- Anbu121 ( talk me ) 14:16, 25 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Right now, I'm in a hospital (broken leg) so I fear that I won't have more access but will try my best to give the review by tonight.  TheSpecialUser TSU 02:19, 26 September 2012 (UTC)
 * I have addressed some of the points. The institute is going to publish a book in a few days. Will expand the article and address the lack of refs once I get the book. -- Anbu121 ( talk me ) 18:14, 28 September 2012 (UTC)
 * When you address the issues, please add done at the end of the line to keep a track or just strike the line which is addressed as I'm unable to know what has been done exactly.  TheSpecialUser TSU 01:33, 29 September 2012 (UTC)


 * Review


 * Since you've linked Indian Institute of Management in the lead, please remove the See also section✅
 * Per WP:LEAD, the lead of the article should summarize the article which it doesn't right now. Please expand it and at least make it of 2 good paras, each of 4 or 5 lines✅
 * Images need WP:ALT✅
 * Captions such are too small in the article. Per WP:CAPTION, please expand them✅
 * In Organisation, use ===stuff=== instead of ;✅
 * Same as above with Post graduate education.✅
 * This doesn't look much reliable. Please get another one.✅
 * remove this as it hasn't been verified by twitter✅
 * remove this also as it is maintained by "IIM Lucknow's Media and Communication Cell, and is a student initiative"✅
 * Please add english translation of "सुप्रबन्धे राष्ट्र समृद्धि" in the motto✅
 * Add first name of J.J.Irani✅
 * First name of R.L.Raina?✅
 * A Sports Committee composed entirely of students organises most of the sporting events in the college. It selects and facilitates the institute sports team. The Intracollege sports event called as Sikander is held throughout the year in a league format. The institute sports team participates in most of the popular college sports meets including the Inter-IIM Meet (Sangharsh) held in the second week of January every year. - ref?✅
 * Synapse,the committee for IT and Knowledge Management conducts a plethora of events in gaming, quizzing and systems areas and handles the IIML network. - ref?✅
 * It is recognised as an institution of excellence by the Ministry of Human Resource Development -> It is recognised as "an institution of excellence" by the Ministry of Human Resource Development✅
 * which houses gymnasium, swimming pool and indoor courts for Table Tennis, Squash and Snooker. The multipurpose utility hall (Samanjasya) is used to host most of the cultural activities in the campus. Bigger Events and Music shows during fests are held in the Open air theatre situated between the academic block and Library. - ref?✅
 * A Central school (Kendriya Vidyalaya) was established opposite the campus as a community school. - ref?✅
 * which is regarded as one of the main global accredition bodies in business education. - ref?✅ sentence removed
 * The PGP course was started in 1985-86 - fullform of PGP?✅
 * All the major buildings in the campus are named in Sanskrit[19] according to the functionality of the building - link sanskrit and what does "functionality of the building" mean?✅ Functionality of the building means: The academic block functions for teaching, hence named as Bodhigrih.
 * academic blocks (Bodhigrih-I and II) - in brackets, add like this academic blocks (Sanskrit: Bodhigrih-I and II) I think this kind of format is used for indic scripts. Here the script is not sanskrit, the words inside the bracket represents official name of the buildings.
 * According to the article, "All the major buildings in the campus are named in Sanskrit". The names are in sanskrit according to the article as well as I can re-call few of them when I read. Using a template would be a bad option as we do not need sanskrit script. So adding (Sanskrit: ***) would be appropriate as a non-Indian or non-Asian reader might get a bit confused.  TheSpecialUser TSU 22:56, 10 October 2012 (UTC)


 * As said in the above bullet, make changes at other places where sanskrit script is written in brackets same as above.
 * office and FPM classrooms - FPM? fullform?✅
 * The institute has an incubation centre for supporting the entrepreneurial ventures of its students and alumni - POV. please neutralize I am not sure how to neutralize this. I have added a ref to strengthen it. Please neutralize if you can.
 * the ABM course - ABM? fullform?✅
 * Sometimes you've italiced in the brackets and sometimes not. Please be consistent and use italic form✅
 * The campus which was started in barren lands has been converted into a thriving ecosystem with the plantation of trees - please neutralize✅
 * The campus consists of Peacocks, monitor lizards, porcupines and a variety of other birds - what? do they even store birds in campus? zoo (=P)? no need of this sentence. or make it look like its an encyclopedic entry.✅
 * The college is packed with open lawns and tree lined pathways - Needs to be neutralized✅
 * Jamshed J Irani -> Jamshed J. Irani✅
 * 10 industrialists, 4 Government representatives and 3  -> if the number is below 10, it is written like "nine" per MoS. So change 4 to four and 3 to three✅
 * The Director of IIM Lucknow, the head of the institution, is appointed by the Ministry of Human Resource Development. The institute has separate deans for Academic affairs and Planning and development. - ref?✅
 * with a Company or Organisation -> with a company or an organisation✅
 * 3 month term in a foreign university during the period of October to December in their 2nd Year -> three month term in a foreign university during the period of October to December in their second Year✅
 * Make sure that you use "second" instead of "2nd" and similarly with 1st, 3rd,....✅
 * International Programme in Management for Executives(IPMX) - space needed before (✅
 * Space also needed before ( at; R.L.Raina(Planning & Development) and Archana Shukla(Noida)✅
 * IIML was ranked #5 by the Business Today 50 best business schools of 2011 -> IIML was ranked #5 by the Business Today in the list of 50 best business schools of 2011✅
 * and #4 by the Hindustan Times India's top 50 business schools of 2011[55] and by the 2012 edition of CNBC-TV18's Top B-Schools in India - clarification needed. what did CNBC rate it? If it is 4, then split the whole sentence into 2. One about 5th rank and the other with two 4 ranks✅
 * life at IIM Lucknow is filled with academics, extracurriculars and entertainment. All the cultural programmes, competitions and management events are entirely organised by students. - ref? and needs to be neutralized a bit✅
 * The intranet portal Blondie has - remove italic and use ""✅
 * Synapse,the -> Synapse, the✅
 * The 3 day - 3 -> three✅
 * Students create games and various other simulated environments, to capture consumers’ subconscious thoughts - neutralize it please✅
 * A variety of opportunities exist for students to get a taste of entrepreneurship. - neutralize please!✅
 * Just Tea and Gossip and Bite - not italic but ""✅
 * The Entrepreneurship Cell conducts a competition called Bizness, - rmv italic and use ""✅
 * As stated above, same with Credence Capital, Aarohan, Synapse, Random Walk, and Abhivyakti ✅

 TheSpecialUser TSU 08:34, 28 September 2012 (UTC)


 * Though inactive, I'll be checking this.  TheSpecialUser TSU 15:00, 29 September 2012 (UTC)

Few more fixes


 * ref 9 needs to be fixed (format) ✅
 * Unreliable source ✅
 * Unlink Playback singer per WP:OVERLINK. Since the link appears in the first line of the article for the singer, the link is of new use ✅
 * Also see if there were people who can possibly be called "notable" but are without an article here. Adding up red links help to get the idea that which articles are we lacking in. If you can't find any other notable person (who don't have article), then no problem. :I couldn't find any

Good to go for GA. I'd still like to have a look for 1a criteria and will give out final issues about the prose by tonight. Cheers!  TheSpecialUser TSU 22:56, 10 October 2012 (UTC)

This is it!  TheSpecialUser TSU 21:22, 11 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Last run...
 * All students are given separate single rooms in hostels. All the hostels have internet connectivity and common TV room. -> All students are given separate single rooms in hostels with internet connectivity and common TV room.✅
 * Every student gets an institute email id and most of the official communication and notifications are carried out through email. -> Every student gets an institute email id through which most of the official notifications are sent as well as communication are carried out.✅
 * Samvit, the annual leadership summit of IIM Lucknow witnesses some of the financial leaders and economists of the country and provides opportunity for the students to interact with them. - "and provides opportunity for the students to interact with them" - need to either remove it or re-phrase it. What about -> Samvit, the annual leadership summit of IIM Lucknow witnesses some of the financial leaders and economists of the country with whom the students get opportunity to interact.✅
 * supporting the entrepreneurial ventures of its students and alumni - "ventures" sound odd. can you suggest any other word instead of it? + this sentence is repeated. Please make sure that it doesn't occur.✅
 * A variety of entrepreneurial opportunities exist in the institute for the students. - "A variety" -> "Many"✅
 * are sold to the next batch every year - what do you mean by "the next batch"? : Actually, the restaurants are owned by a group of students. When the students pass out, they sell the restaurant to a group of students in the next batch
 * INR 2000 -> ₹2000✅
 * The mess - mess? any other word? :I couldn't find any substitute. 'Canteen' or 'restaurant' will completely change the meaning
 * Varchasva is the annual Cultural and Sports festival of IIM Lucknow. It is a three-day long event held towards the end of September every year -> Varchasva, a three-day long event held towards the end of September every year is the annual Cultural and Sports festival of IIM Lucknow.✅
 * Manfest is the flagship management event organized by the institute, while its sports and cultural festival is Varchasva. - it looks as if it is just kept for the mentioning. Remove it please as it breaks up the flow. How about -> Many cultural programmes, competitions and management events are held by various student as well as official committees in the institute.✅