Talk:Indian Peace Commission/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Auntieruth55 (talk · contribs) 16:39, 26 July 2018 (UTC)


 * I'll start this in a day or two. auntieruth (talk) 16:39, 26 July 2018 (UTC)
 * , I've read through this. Very interesting.  So sorry for the delay.  See my edits  here.  auntieruth (talk) 13:47, 5 September 2018 (UTC)
 * No worries auntieruth. I did see the tweaks you've been doing. Are there any specific additional areas of weakness you feel need addressed?  G M G  talk  14:15, 5 September 2018 (UTC)
 * would you go through it again and clean up, similar to what i've done? Sometimes it seems repetitive, and sometimes I'm not sure what treaty we're talking about....auntieruth (talk) 14:33, 14 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Hey auntieruth. I've gone through again and tried to clear up where I can. I'm not sure how much more I can really simplify things given the breadth of the topic covering 5ish other main articles.  G M G  talk  15:02, 18 September 2018 (UTC)