Talk:Indo-Pakistani war of 1947–1948/GA1

GA Review
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I'm quick-failing this article. I doubt it even fulfills B-Class criteria. First off it does not comply with WP:MOS with respect to layout, particularly the Stages to War section. The lead is to short to provide a summary of the article.

The other major issue, which is glaringly obvious throughout the article, is the lack of citations. The article is riddled with citation needed tags, and there are entire paragraphs and sections that lack any references. The article lists several books under the Bibliography section, but none of them are used as references to support the information provided.

I am at a loss as to why this article was nominated for GA. I wrote my comments after taking a very quick look of the article, and didn't even bother to read it. --Sherif9282 (talk) 12:07, 22 August 2009 (UTC)