Talk:Indra Devi/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 04:14, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Many thanks for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 06:39, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

Criteria
1. Prose ✅

2. Verifiability ✅

3. Depth of Coverage ✅

4. Neutral ✅

5. Stable ✅

6. Illustrations ✅ - AGF

7. Miscellaneous ✅

Comments
1.
 * See MOS:OVERLINK. I don't think India needs linked.  Same with Argentina
 * Removed.


 * "believed to be the first Yoga" - This is the first time yoga is capitalized, the rest are lowercase. This should be consistent.
 * Fixed.


 * Link guru at first mention
 * Done.


 * Sari is a duplink
 * Fixed.


 * "St Petersburg" - Should there be a period after "St"?
 * Saint it is.

2.
 * See WP:RSP. Find a Grave is not a reliable source.
 * Removed.


 * "yoga teachers.[9][6][14]" - Some editors are very particular that refs should be in numerical order, it's probably best to have them in numerical order so no complaints are caused
 * Done.


 * "respected mother".[17][9]" - Ref order
 * Done.


 * "Devi recorded several instructional talks on yoga in the 1970s, including "Renew Your Life with Yoga."[35]" - The ref provided does not seem to include the 1970s anywhere.
 * Said 'later' instead.


 * Do we have ISBNs for her first three works, or just OCLCs?
 * OCLC is all that's available for those early days.


 * Ref 5 needs the author and an accessdate
 * Added.


 * Ref 7 needs an accessdate
 * Added.


 * Ref 10 needs an accessdate
 * Added.


 * The page ranges in the references should have endashes, not the short dashes
 * Done. This definitely comes under the category of "life's too short to stuff mushrooms".


 * Ref 17 needs the author
 * Added.


 * Ref 22 needs the accessdate
 * Added.


 * The sources should be in alphabetical order
 * Sorted, in both senses.


 * Looks like there's a weird markup error in one of the sources, not entirely sure where the error is though.
 * Fixed.

3.
 * Date of birth isn't in the main prose.
 * Added.


 * The sections about India and China aren't summarized in the lead
 * Added.

4.

5.

6.
 * AGF on the album cover image. Can't verify if it was published without a copyright notice or not, but I'll assume good faith that the file tagging is accurate.
 * Noted.

7.


 * - Ref 37's to Find a Grave yet. It looks like it may not be necessary.  That looks like all that's left before this'll pass. Hog Farm (talk) 14:42, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Removed. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:44, 18 April 2020 (UTC)