Talk:Indre Wijdefjorden National Park/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk) 21:50, 24 October 2010 (UTC)

I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.

Disambiguations: none found.

Linkrot: none found. Jezhotwells (talk) 21:51, 24 October 2010 (UTC)

Checking against GA criteria

 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * ' 'a unique plant-geographic exclusive vegetation Can this be clarified, it doesn't seem clear to me. Also, bird mountain vegetation.  Both phrases used twice.  bird mountain''?  What is meant by this?
 * I made some minor copy-edits. I split up "fjord landscape " as this is not an English word.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * Assume good faith for off-line sources. As far as I can ascertain all sources are reliable.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * Pity that there are no photographs, but I guess some may become available in future.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Just the two phrases which need re-writing for clarity as they don't make much senses at present. On hold for seven days. Jezhotwells (talk) 22:14, 24 October 2010 (UTC)
 * OK, nesting cliffs! I am happy to pass this as a good article. Jezhotwells (talk) 01:35, 30 October 2010 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Just the two phrases which need re-writing for clarity as they don't make much senses at present. On hold for seven days. Jezhotwells (talk) 22:14, 24 October 2010 (UTC)
 * OK, nesting cliffs! I am happy to pass this as a good article. Jezhotwells (talk) 01:35, 30 October 2010 (UTC)

Thank you for taking the time to review the article. I've rephrased both sentences so they are a bit more reader friendly (yes, I had to stop and think myself what they actually meant). Arsenikk (talk)  10:18, 25 October 2010 (UTC)
 * We still need an explanation of "bird mountain". What do you mean by this? Jezhotwells (talk) 12:55, 29 October 2010 (UTC)
 * Sorry, trying to do direct translations here (not always as successful). Changed to 'nesting cliff', which was in my Norwegian–English dictionary. Arsenikk (talk)  13:13, 29 October 2010 (UTC)