Talk:Injection moulding/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Retrolord (talk · contribs) 01:31, 30 January 2013 (UTC)

I have review the article and put it on hold to clarify some issues:


 * I am concerned that the Equipment section lead and the mold section are too technical? What do you think?

Thanks.

Retrolord (talk) 02:25, 30 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Honestly I don't think they're too technical. They could be a hell of a lot more technical, and Mold design is probably the central discipline in Injection molding. Before trying to improve this article I had actually been toying with the idea of creating a separate article called Injection mold design or something. It's up to you as the reviewer, and of course I have a stake in the article, but I think it flows well and fits with the rest of the article. --Kierkkadontalk/contribs 02:40, 30 January 2013 (UTC)

Then the article is passed. Retrolord (talk) 02:43, 30 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Huzzah! --Kierkkadontalk/contribs 02:45, 30 January 2013 (UTC)


 * I disagree with this pass. The lead does not fully summarize the article and I would like to see more citations in the "Process troubleshooting" section.--Jasper Deng (talk) 02:47, 30 January 2013 (UTC)
 * That better? I rewrote the lede, trimmed Process troubleshooting, added a couple of references. --Kierkkadontalk/contribs 03:14, 30 January 2013 (UTC)
 * I like the lead much better, although it still doesn't quite summarize everything (but not enough to be of huge concern). Still might want more citations (especially a bit more variety of sources if possible); Power requirements section needs a proper citation using a tag.--Jasper Deng (talk) 04:16, 30 January 2013 (UTC)
 * This weekend I'll be spending some time in the huge academic library at my university. I should be able to get a lot of good references there. --Kierkkadontalk/contribs 04:18, 30 January 2013 (UTC)