Talk:Inolvidable (song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Wikipedian Penguin (talk · contribs) 15:38, 24 November 2012 (UTC)


 * I am reviewing this article currently. — WP: PENGUIN  · [ TALK ]  15:38, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
 * The article has passed. Great work. — WP: PENGUIN  · [ TALK ]  00:59, 27 November 2012 (UTC)

Source spotcheck: I've checked all web sources, and found no major concerns, apart from one.
 * What makes awardsandshows.com a reliable source?
 * It is the only source I could find with that info, but I will keep searching. Jaespinoza (talk) 20:38, 26 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 22:36, 26 November 2012 (UTC)

Prose:
 * "experience" should be "experienced" here: "The song has experience popular acclaim"
 * Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 20:38, 26 November 2012 (UTC)


 * "'Inolvidable', written in 1944,[2] was released during the Cuban musical movement led by pianists, on which Gutiérrez participated." – should be "in which", not "on which".
 * Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 20:38, 26 November 2012 (UTC)


 * Comma after "In 1992" here: "In 1992 a compilation album including an instrumental version of the song performed by Gutiérrez was released."
 * Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 20:38, 26 November 2012 (UTC)


 * "According to Rodrigo Bazán on his book Y Si Vivo Cien Años... Antología del Bolero en México" – reads strangely. I suggest changing "on" to "in" and adding a comma after "According to Rodrigo Bazán".
 * Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 20:38, 26 November 2012 (UTC)


 * "the song was not different from other that were released at the time about unhappy love" – "other" should be plural.
 * Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 20:38, 26 November 2012 (UTC)


 * "Lyrically, the song presents the protagonist kissing different lips looking for new sensations " – "and" before "looking".
 * Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 20:38, 26 November 2012 (UTC)


 * Comma after "Usted": "Puerto-Rican Danny Rivera recorded a tribute album titled Inolvidable Tito: A Mi Me Pasa lo Mismo Que a Usted including a version of 'Inolvidable'."
 * Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 20:38, 26 November 2012 (UTC)


 * "The album was nominated for a Grammy Award for Best Latin Pop Performance." – the two "for"s seem a bit repetitive.
 * Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 20:38, 26 November 2012 (UTC)


 * "Mexican singer Luis Miguel released in 1991 Romance, an album produced..." – reword two "Mexican singer Luis Miguel released the 1991 album Romance, which was produced..."
 * Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 20:38, 26 November 2012 (UTC)


 * "The success of the album revived the interest for bolero, revitalizing the genre" – "revitalizing the genre" isn't needed, because "revived the interest for bolero" implies the same thing.
 * Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 20:38, 26 November 2012 (UTC)


 * No hyphen in "five-million".
 * Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 20:38, 26 November 2012 (UTC)


 * "The first single taken from the album was "Inolvidable", a version that 'guarantees the adoption of the past, and that the romantic sensibility is not dead.'" – who says this?
 * Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 20:38, 26 November 2012 (UTC)


 * "The track debuted in the Billboard Top Latin Songs chart (formerly Hot Latin Tracks) chart at number 30..." – "chart" is written twice.
 * Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 20:38, 26 November 2012 (UTC)


 * comma after "1991": "... in the week of November 23, 1991 climbing to the top ten three weeks later."
 * Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 20:38, 26 November 2012 (UTC)


 * ""Inolvidable" peaked at number-one on January 25, 1992,[25] replacing "Amor Mío, ¿Qué Me Has Hecho?" by Spanish performer Camilo Sesto and being succeeded by "Si Piensas, Si Quieres" by Brazilian singer-songwriter Roberto Carlos and Spanish singer Rocío Dúrcal, five weeks later." – there's some unnecessary info here. All we need to know is that it peaked at number one oh January 25, 1992, and stayed there for five weeks.
 * Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 20:38, 26 November 2012 (UTC)


 * "'Inolvidable' ended 1992 as the third best performing Latin single of the year in the United States." – awkward. Write it plainer: "'Inolvidable' was number three on the Billboard Hot 100 ear-End Chart of 1992."
 * Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 20:38, 26 November 2012 (UTC)

Media:
 * In order to pass WP:NFCC, the three music samples must have a rationale as to how and why they add to the readers' understanding of the recordings. (eg. discussion of instruments, melody, etc.).
 * I will be working on that. Jaespinoza (talk) 20:38, 26 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 21:00, 26 November 2012 (UTC)
 * The captions need to be sourced and have some level of detail. Otherwise, they should be removed as they do not pass WP:V or WP:NFCC. — WP: PENGUIN  · [ TALK ]  21:48, 26 November 2012 (UTC)
 * A question here, do I have to remove the captions but not the music sample? Jaespinoza (talk) 22:39, 26 November 2012 (UTC)
 * The samples, to clarify. — WP: PENGUIN  · [ TALK ]  23:29, 26 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 00:48, 27 November 2012 (UTC)

Manual of style:
 * Layout – the "Formats and tracklisting" and "Credits and personnel" should be subheadings under the "Luis Miguel version".
 * Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 20:38, 26 November 2012 (UTC)

Stability and neutrality: Looks good to me.
 * Thanks. Jaespinoza (talk) 20:38, 26 November 2012 (UTC)

Final assessment: Passed.