Talk:Interfolio

Incoherent sentence written in bureaucratic gobbledygook
"Interfolio’s services represents a complete faculty lifecycle and information system."

If this has any meaning, I have no idea what it is, and certainly very few readers will be able to extract anything of use from that sentence.

A couple of sentences later, we encounter another similar phrase:

"… delivering academic materials to scholarly opportunities"

What is a "scholarly opportunity" ???

Wait – a few sentences earlier we have yet another problematic sentence:

"The company provides software to assist shared governance processes and faculty activity tracking tools to assist with institutional accreditation and reporting."

SUGGESTION: Get rid of the entire article, and find someone who a) is knowledgeable about Interfolio but who b) ALSO knows how to write clearly. Or at least more clearly.108.245.209.39 (talk) 03:23, 8 May 2017 (UTC)