Talk:International Day of Yoga/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: DreamRimmer (talk · contribs) 04:06, 24 September 2023 (UTC)


 * Many thanks for taking this on. I'm used to working through comments from reviewers and will respond to any issues promptly. Looking forward to it! Chiswick Chap (talk) 06:31, 24 September 2023 (UTC)
 * It's great to see your enthusiasm. I'll be sharing my comments soon.  𝙳𝚛𝚎𝚊𝚖𝚁𝚒𝚖𝚖𝚎𝚛  𝚍𝚒𝚜𝚌𝚞𝚜𝚜  08:07, 24 September 2023 (UTC)

Origin

 * Replace with In 2015, the Reserve Bank of India issued a 10-rupee commemorative coin to mark the International Day of Yoga.
 * Done.

UN Declaration

 * In the phrase "In Indian calendars," add "the" before "Indian".
 * Done.


 * In the third paragraph - Change "lauded" to "praised" for a more common synonym.
 * Done.


 * Change "the benefit of yoga" to "the benefit of yoga." for smoother phrasing.
 * Done.

In practice

 * In the first sentence, it's better to specify that "The first International Day of Yoga" was "celebrated" rather than "observed." While "observed" is not incorrect, the other term is more commonly used in this context.

Reception

 * You should replace "Modi" with "Prime Minister Modi" in some instances to provide more context.
 * Glossed the first instances in both text and image caption.

Reference
Please fix following cite parameters.


 * In |website=www.mea.gov.in, remove www.
 * In |publisher=Times of India, add "The" before Times of India.
 * In |agency=NDTV, replace "agency" parameter with "publisher".
 * Done all.


 * Please retain the three best sources out of the six references for "Similar days have been held in cities in India and around the world each year since then," and remove the other three.
 * Done.

Ref. 3, fine Ref 7, fine Ref 16, good Ref 22, good Ref, 23, good
 * Spot checks -

Neutral

 * Pass WP:NPOV.

Stable

 * It is stable.

Coverage

 * This article effectively covers all the essential aspects of the topic.

Images

 * All of the files have proper licensing and are relevant to the topic.

Copyright
According to Earwig, the article's text closely matches content from these sources:

It's clear that these portions have been copied from Wikipedia. Therefore, I recommend adding the template to the article's talk page.
 * img1.wsimg.com (92.8% similarity) --- gets File Not Found error
 * researchgate.net (75.0% similarity)
 * organiser.org (49.7% similarity) --- unable to add this as it is blocked by Wikipedia's Protection Filter
 * pib.gov.in (41.2% similarity)


 * Added that now. Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:17, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
 * I don't see any other issues, so promoting it.  𝙳𝚛𝚎𝚊𝚖𝚁𝚒𝚖𝚖𝚎𝚛  𝚍𝚒𝚜𝚌𝚞𝚜𝚜  16:03, 3 October 2023 (UTC)