Talk:International Firefighters' Day

Reads like a Reader's Digest piece
"On December 2, 1998, a tragic event shook the Linton Community, Australia and the world. Firefighters in Linton, Australia- a populated region in Victoria- were fighting a large wild fire and called for mutual aid. This urgent mutual aid call brought the Geelong West Fire Brigade to the scene not knowing the despair and tragedy that was in store. Garry Vredeveldt, Chris Evans, Stuart Davidson, Jason Thomas, and Matthew Armstrong all loaded into company’s truck. They were part of a strike team and were being sent to help extinguish the flames. As the five headed into the hot zone, the wind suddenly switched direction, engulfing the truck in flames and killing all five members. This unfortunate incident is what inspired JJ Edmondson to bring about an international holiday, called International Fire Fighters Day, to support the lives lost and dedicated fire fighters who risk their lives every day to save life and property."

Really? Can we please revise this entire article. This thing reads like a Reader's Digest piece. Oecology (talk) 10:01, 27 May 2016 (UTC)


 * Have attempted a rewrite following style guidelines; for advocates, concision arguably communicates the key messages better? Factvalue (talk) 20:55, 10 July 2022 (UTC)