Talk:International Rights Advocates v Apple, Microsoft, Dell, Tesla

Hey Farah!

The topic you have chosen is very interesting and this is a great start for your article! What you have written so far would be a great addition to an introduction/background section. Some things that sparked my interest are the consumers you mentioned (Apple, Tesla, etc). I think I’d be great if you added a section that further discusses these main actors and how much consumption they partake in. Additionally, a section focused on corruption scandals in the country would be interstellar, maybe one or two different instances in which it happened. I also really liked your writing style, it is very smooth and easy to read! Overall I think you are in the right path and I think the topic you have selected can be expanded into several directions.

Brany Barragan (talk) 04:58, 7 April 2020 (UTC)Brany Barragan