Talk:Internet Association

Promotional intro
Hi. The previous intro was vague and unorganized- essentially a quote of what it "purports to represent". I generally consider the intro to be a summary of what a company or organization does, plus key info that may be relevant to someone who wants to quickly understand what they are reading about. Do you disagree?80.255.13.14 (talk) 09:22, 16 July 2018 (UTC)

Events
, many organizations and businesses have an "events" section. The material was sourced. Do you mind elaborating on the issue/editing the text instead of simply reverting? Thanks83.142.83.25 (talk) 05:20, 5 August 2018 (UTC)
 * See WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS. The "Virtuous Circle Summit" is self-cited; no independent indication of notability. The cite for the 2014 award doesn't even mention the IA. 2016 is the most incidental of mentions - it's a pretty incidental mention of the person giving the award, and even less significant a mention of the recipient. 2017 - two sentences. You simply don't have significant independent coverage of this stuff, so it stays out. Pinkbeast (talk) 06:02, 5 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Ok, thanks.80.255.7.39 (talk) 06:13, 5 August 2018 (UTC)

Further expansion
Hello. Given the recent back-and-forth on the page, it seemed I should check in prior to contributing to this article. I'd like to expand on the group's activities- is there some reason I should not? Thanks for your help.156.233.118.227 (talk) 18:20, 13 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Do you perhaps have a conflict of interest you should disclose? It seems like there are a lot of anonymous editors all very keen to paint the group in the best possible light. Pinkbeast (talk) 07:09, 14 August 2018 (UTC)
 * , no COI. I actually know very little about this topic or this group. I'm on vacation now and won't be online for a while, but may reach out to you later to fix up the article, if that's fine with you.76.76.35.227 (talk) 16:53, 15 August 2018 (UTC)

Organizing page
Forgot to write an edit summary: I divided the subjects into easy-to-see topics to make reading the article and finding information easier for the reader. Any objections, please explain. I personally hate the "Wall of Words" I find in many articles. Thanks. 72.11.28.82 (talk) 11:06, 24 October 2018 (UTC)