Talk:Interstate 29 in Iowa/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Admrboltz (talk) 17:06, 11 January 2011 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * I am holding the article. --Admrboltz (talk) 17:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * I am holding the article. --Admrboltz (talk) 17:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
 * I am holding the article. --Admrboltz (talk) 17:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

Comments

 * The lead seems a bit short --Admrboltz (talk) 17:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Lengthened a bit. –Fredddie™ 22:36, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
 * "US 20 Bus. traffic is forced onto the interstate for 1/2 miles (0.80 km) before it exits via the volleyball interchange which represents the national northern end of U.S. Route 77." - forced on seems like poor wording. --Admrboltz (talk) 17:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Changed forced to directed. –Fredddie™
 * First three sentences in History read kind of choppy. --Admrboltz (talk) 17:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Removed a sentence and redid the paragraph structure, hopefully that helps. –Fredddie™
 * No need to link interstate highway again in History. --Admrboltz (talk) 17:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Fixed. –Fredddie™
 * Bottom of RJL needs Jctbtm. --Admrboltz (talk) 17:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Fixed. –Fredddie™
 * Overlinking in references. Only need to link Iowa DOT once. --Admrboltz (talk) 17:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Fixed. –Fredddie™
 * File:I-29 (IA) map.svg needs a GIS / outline source. --Admrboltz (talk) 17:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Not my work, but added. –Fredddie™
 * The 85 map is a dead link --Admrboltz (talk) 17:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
 * De-linked. –Fredddie™

I have addressed your concerns. –Fredddie™ 22:36, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Passing. --Admrboltz (talk)