Talk:Interstate 43/GA1

GA Review
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Comments:
 * 1) Are the purpose of the abbreviations in the lead to indicate what they stand for later on?
 * ✅ That was the intention, but considering there are too many, I removed them —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) In third sentence of lead, add "a" after "shares" and link to concurrency (road) should only display the text "concurrency"
 * ✅ —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) The sentence "I-43 was spawned from toll road proposals that included a Milwaukee to Superior corridor included Hurley, Wausau and Green Bay." sounds awkward
 * ✅ rewritten  —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) In first sentence in third paragraph of lead, add comma after "Interstates"
 * ✅ —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Change "east west" to "the east-west"
 * ✅ —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Remove hyphen in last sentence of lead
 * ✅ —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) In second sentence of history, you use "approved" twice. Can you use a different word for one of them?
 * ✅ rewrote the last one —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) In sentence "construction first began in 1963 on the freeway that was at the time designated US-141.", construction needs to be capitalized
 * ✅ —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) "An additional 10 miles (16 km) In 1965, Construction began on a 9.3-mile (15.0 km) bypass of Sheboygan. "? sounds like a run-on sentence or a sentence with missing information
 * ✅ rewritten - must've deleted part of it :| —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) "the DOT" sounds colliqual
 * ✅ corrected to "WisDOT" —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) In sentence "a government collaboration called the "Highway 15 Committee" was formed present promote the route.", "a" needs to be capitalized and "present promote the route" sounds awkward
 * ✅fixed. rewrote the awkward portion to "to present and promote"  —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) "southwestern segment's" sounds awkward
 * ✅ replaced entire portion with "route" - the focus was already on this portion. —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) "I-984"? Do you mean I-894? Also add a period after that
 * ✅ —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Replace "lengthy" with "long"
 * ✅ —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Replace hyphen with comma in sentence "The next segment, to East Troy, was opened in 1972 - the year the "Highway 15 Committee" had hoped the route would be completed in its entirety."
 * ✅ —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) "Exit" does not need to be capitalixed
 * ✅ —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Replace "being completed" with "ending"
 * ✅ —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Try not to use "I-43" in almost every sentence of route description
 * ✅ —  master son T - C 00:17, 9 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) "crosses interchanges" sounds awkward
 * ✅ I've rewritten this, as it seemed awkward to me too. —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Wikilink Milwaukee, Wisconsin
 * ✅ also linked Beloit. —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Replace "four-lane" with "four lanes"
 * ✅ —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) "the Marquette" sounds colliqual
 * ✅ rewritten in full with "interchange —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) If picture is of interchange with WIS 83, caption should mention WIS 83, not WIS 28
 * ✅ fixed —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) "northbown"? Do you mean "northbound"?
 * ✅ fixed —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) "the northern terminus"? of what? WIS 100? I-43?
 * ✅ indicated as "Green Bay" instead. —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) "Sheboygan, Wisconsin": Do not need to indicate it is in Wisconsin as we know this route is entirely within the state. A wikilink to Sheboygan would be helpful here also
 * ✅ —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Rewrite "I-43 Sheboygan interchanges are at" to "In Sheboygan, I-43 interchanges with"
 * ✅ —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Add period after "WIS 42"
 * ✅ —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) "after nine miles (14 km) from Sheboygan" sounds awkward
 * ✅ changed to "nine miles (14 km) north of Sheboygan." —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Change " bypass" to "bypasses"
 * ✅ —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) In sentence "WIS 42 north follow I-43 north to the interchange with US 10.", change "follow" to "follows"
 * ✅ —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) "US 10 west follow I-43" should also be "follows" as it is only one route
 * ✅ —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) "Manitowoc county": "county" should be capitalized
 * ✅ —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) "interstate" should be capitalized throughout article
 * ✅ —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Wikilink Green Bay, Wisconsin
 * ✅ I linked it further up the description where the vagueness of which terminus was discussed in item 25. —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) "WIS 54 and WIS 57 and the Fox River,": should be "WIS 54, WIS 57, and the Fox River"
 * ✅ I reroted it to say "interchanges with WIS 54 and WIS 57 and crosses the Fox River" since it was meant to show the two routes being on the same road. —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) If there is no exit number, do not need to use word "none" as it is not "exit none"
 * ✅ —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) In junction template used in exit list, directions should not be capitalized
 * ✅ —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) When indicating directinos of exits in exit list, clearly indiucate whether it is an exit or an entrance. i.e. use "northbound exit' instead of "northbound"
 * ✅ I didn't realize the vagueness that presented - It was intended to show the different sign texts presented based on which way the interchange was approached. Some of these were half interchanges though so I noted them. —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) "UA 45"? You mean "US 45"
 * ✅ —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) For notes concerning concurrencies in exit list, follow this example: use "North end of US 45 overlap" instead of "US 45 South follow I-43 South"
 * ✅ —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 15:28, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the review. If there is anything else, please let me know. —  master son T - C 21:32, 8 March 2009 (UTC)