Talk:Interstate 84 in Utah/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Imzadi1979 (talk · contribs) 02:44, 31 December 2013 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * Just a few little comments below.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * Looks good.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * a caption for the map would be a good addition, otherwise all is good here.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * I'm passing since I'm confident that the prose will be touched up quickly. The comment about a future ACR hold though.  Imzadi 1979  →   03:25, 31 December 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * I'm passing since I'm confident that the prose will be touched up quickly. The comment about a future ACR hold though.  Imzadi 1979  →   03:25, 31 December 2013 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * "The highway enters Box Elder County near Snowville before becoming concurrent with I-15 in Tremonton before traveling south through Brigham City and Ogden." That could be split up or reworded to get rid of " ... before ... before ... "
 * Fixed. --  Admr Boltz  03:42, 31 December 2013 (UTC)
 * RD
 * "This is expressed in terms of average annual daily traffic (AADT), a measure of traffic volume for any average day of the year." I've found it's better to just pipe a link in the next sentence along the lines of In 2012, UDOT calculated on average that ..." than to try to add a quick explanation of AADT.
 * My personal preference is to spell it out a bit more clearly. --  Admr Boltz  03:43, 31 December 2013 (UTC)
 * In general, there are some prose things I'd copy edit if this article were going to ACR, but for GA, I'm ok leaving them. I'll make an offer now to help c/e pre-ACR actually.