Talk:Interstate 96/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dough4872 (talk · contribs) 02:23, 31 July 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)

 I will put the article on hold for some fixes to be made.  Dough 48  72  02:23, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * The sentence "Two people, Douglas James Baker (age 15) and Jason Eldridge (age 27) were killed in the incident, one of the largest multi-vehicle collisions in U.S. history, which was blamed on heavy fog." needs to be split.
 * Fixed.  Imzadi 1979  →   02:49, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * Citations needed for "(As of 2007, I-67 is the largest odd number not in use.)" and "but it would be some time before I-96 was finished into the city."
 * Removed that completely in the first case and repeated a cite in the second.  Imzadi 1979  →   02:49, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Reference 18 is coming up with a 403 error.
 * Only in the automated tool. Try loading it directly, and it works fine.  Imzadi 1979  →   02:49, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * "The segment from Livonia east is also the Jeffries Freeway, named for a former mayor of Detroit." - You should indicate who the former mayor is.
 * Done.  Imzadi 1979  →   02:49, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
 * The route description should include more details about interchanges. It seems like some highways the road interchanges with are not mentioned in the route description.
 * That's what we have the exit list for. Most of the interchanges with the major state highways are already directly mentioned in the RD.  Imzadi 1979  →   02:49, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
 * I do not see the need for a brief overview of the history at the beginning of the history.
 * I like it so that it isn't L2 header followed immediately by an L3 subheader, and it it's not doing any harm.  Imzadi 1979  →   02:49, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * I will now pass the article.  Dough 48  72  02:52, 31 July 2012 (UTC)