Talk:Into Temptation (film)

"Optioned" and "industry officials"
I found the following language confusing, and I think both passages need to be reworked:

In the lead section: "Into Temptation was optioned in Hollywood, but talks fell through..."

In the primary text: "Into Temptation was optioned in Hollywood, but Coyle was displeased when industry officials pushed for a different ending and more gratuitous sex scenes. Due to complications from the financial crisis of 2007-2010, the Hollywood discussions eventually collapsed."

It is customary and proper to describe a script as being "optioned" for potential production, but not a completed film. Are you talking about something like a provisional release deal? The bit about "industry officials" is also odd. Are you talking about executives at a particular studio (which studio?), at multiple studios (which ones?), or some other sort of industry figures (what sort?)? DocKino (talk) 18:53, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
 * I found an online link to the story used as a source here, which I've since added to the article. As you can see, it's sort of vague, which is why I had to be vague with "industry officials". Additionally, the word "optioned" is the one used by Coyle in an exact quote, so I'm not sure what other word to use, as his quote doesn't give much more specific information. Perhaps you could take a quick look at that quote and see what words could be used instead? —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  22:52, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

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