Talk:Intro (End of the World)/GA2

GA Review
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Nominator: 02:14, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 07:28, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

Reviewing this soon. Glad that this got sorted out at AfD. Ippantekina (talk) 07:28, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

Prose

 * "After the release of her sixth studio album Positions (2020)" comma before album title
 * "The album's lead single "Yes, And?"" → lead single, "Yes, And?", ...
 * ""Intro (End of the World)" is reported to be the second song Grande wrote for Eternal Sunshine" reported by who?
 * Business Insider; I don't know where did they get that info from whom but they did claimed it. So that's why I put "reported" in the sentence. Gained (talk) 07:55, 4 July 2024 (UTC)
 * "places emphasis on" emphasizes
 * "How can I tell if I'm in the right relationship?". remove the full stop after the quotation mark per MOS:"
 * singing the lyric "If it all ended tomorrow, would I be the one on your mind?". ditto
 * "The track was conceived as a companion to the song both in its sound and lyrics" which track/song are we talking about here...?
 * "Intro (End of the World)"; I have reworded it to that Gained (talk) 07:55, 4 July 2024 (UTC)