Talk:Intronaut

Grammar and style changes to Musical Style
I have cleaned up the writing in the Musical Style section. The changes include, primarily, correcting incorrect grammar and punctuation (e.g., subject/verb agreement, run-on sentences, undefined pronouns) and modified wording to be simpler and more formal. I also removed or revised sections that included overtly subjective language, such as "to great effect".

Other language was removed or revised because it didn't convey information meaningfully. For example, to describe a "beat" as "concise and tight" isn't meaningful to even a specialized audience, let alone a general audience, without describing what exactly those adjectives mean in this specific instance.

73.187.204.200 (talk) 19:23, 19 December 2017 (UTC)

External links modified
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 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20120415193038/http://www.deafsparrow.com/Intronaut-Interview.htm to http://www.deafsparrow.com/Intronaut-Interview.htm
 * Added tag to http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/news/press_releases/intronaut_signs_worldwide_deal_with_century_media_records.html
 * Added archive https://www.webcitation.org/6BmwI3cUY?url=http://www.blabbermouth.net/news.aspx?mode=Article to http://www.roadrunnerrecords.com/blabbermouth.net/news.aspx?mode=Article&newsitemID=116890

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