Talk:Invocation (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 18:47, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

Lead
 * "In this episode, Having been..." lower caps on having
 * Done.--Gen. Quon (talk) 20:44, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
 * "...for ten years, a little boy mysteriously reappears, but has not aged one bit after having been kidnapped for ten years" tad repetitive. I suggest you rephrase it.
 * Changed.--Gen. Quon (talk) 20:44, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

Plot
 * "His brother and father clearly don’t like...", avoid contractions
 * Changed.--Gen. Quon (talk) 20:44, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
 * There are several cases where you have introduced characters full names and continue to do so: "While the Underwoods argue about returned Billy Underwood...", "He believes Ronald Purnell, a delinquent", then a line later, "Doggett questions Ronald Purnell outside" As you have introduced them before, it is fine to use his last name thereafter.
 * Changed.--Gen. Quon (talk) 20:44, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Plural of Underwoods is Underwoods': "When the Underwoods comply...", "While the Underwoods argue" → "When the Underwoods' comply", "While the Underwoods' argue"
 * I didn't change this, because their last name is Underwood, without the "s", so the plural would be "Underwoods".--Gen. Quon (talk) 20:44, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Whoops, my mistake. Lemonade51 (talk) 21:35, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

Production
 * "A majority of the episode was filmed in Pasadena, California." needs source
 * Also didn't change this, because the reference after the next sentence, the "Fraga" one, is citing both.--Gen. Quon (talk) 20:44, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
 * "Doggett is told be a psychic", told by a psychic?
 * I'm not sure what you meant here.--Gen. Quon (talk) 20:44, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Should it be 'told by' instead of 'told be'? Lemonade51 (talk) 21:35, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
 * "the song of John", son?
 * Changed.--Gen. Quon (talk) 20:44, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

Reception
 * "gave the episode 6 out of 10 and called the episode" → "gave the episode 6 out of 10 and called it"
 * Changed.--Gen. Quon (talk) 20:44, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

No problems with sourcing or imaging. On hold. -- Lemonade51 (talk) 18:47, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the review. I changed most of the issues, although there were a few I was fuzzy on.--Gen. Quon (talk) 20:44, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Alright, I fixed everything.--Gen. Quon (talk) 21:37, 15 June 2012 (UTC)