Talk:Iole/GA1

GA Review
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 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * lead should include Heracles and Iole's story in a little more detail. about she being an indirect cause of his death. her husband and son.
 * put additional on lead
 * violation of WP:LAYOUT: Images - text sandwiched between imgs, imgs not spread out (Reduce imgs)
 * reduced images to a minimum plus spread out more


 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * Good work on sourcing but avoid oversourcing. 1 ref per sentence, 1 ref for the whole para is OK, if each sentence is attributed to the same ref.
 * reduced references to a minimum


 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * son Cleodaeus, siblings, mother not discussed
 * added information on Cleodaeus, siblings, and mother
 * the focus should be Iole, not Heracles or Deianera, their story can be curtained. Also the story of centaur Nessus.
 * focused more on Iole and curtailed Heracles and Deianera and Nessus
 * focused more on Iole and curtailed Heracles and Deianera and Nessus


 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * All the best improving the article.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * All the best improving the article.


 * Too many quotes in Other versions section; merge as text. For (looks like wikiquote) policy, see WP:QUOTE.
 * reduced quotes to a minimum


 * Winning Iole in a contest covers more than what it's title says. Please rename appropriately.
 * changed heading to reflect what the section is about


 * Maintain consistency in spellings, 3 versions Deianera, Deianira, Deianeira are found. Just choose 1
 * made one spelling


 * A rewrite considering WP:QUOTE policy and WP:UNDUE is needed, with additional info about family.
 * copyedited accordingly

--Redtigerxyz (talk) 14:35, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
 * replies to review. --Doug Coldwell talk 12:40, 2 September 2008 (UTC)

Plutarch
Parallel Lives of Iole and Clusia: An exact citation, please, for this figment. Septentrionalis PMAnderson 02:32, 4 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Appears to be Pseudo-Plutarch. --Akhilleus (talk) 02:49, 4 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Took out the Plutarch items that seem to be in dispute. --Doug Coldwell talk 11:46, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Not helpful. When described for what it is, not the Parallel Lives, it's a useful reference. Septentrionalis PMAnderson 15:44, 4 September 2008 (UTC)