Talk:Iranshah Atash Behram/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:42, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:42, 28 June 2016 (UTC)
 * I have addressed all issues raised here in the article text. Please see if any further changes are required.-- Nvvchar . 04:24, 29 June 2016 (UTC)


 * General
 * No copyvio/dablink/external link issues
 * Say fire-temple or fire temple
 * Done
 * Lead
 * What exactly is a "fire temple"?
 * Place of worship. Explained in the lead
 * Indian state of Gujarat on the west coast of India Then why say "Indian state"? (also in Location)
 * Changed
 * Don't repeat AD after first mention (also after lead in main article)
 * Corrected
 * Gujarat is linked twice
 * Delinked
 * I'm not sure if it's proper to say Mumbai, I guess it was called Bombay back then
 * Clarified
 * Keep the lead within 2 paras
 * Done
 * Location
 * Bold is not needed again
 * Bolding removed
 * Change the wording a bit, it resembles the lead too much
 * Done
 *  The nearest Railway station No caps in "Railway"
 * Cirrected
 * History
 * What is "agiari"?
 * Agiari is the first level of fire temple while Atash Behram is the highest grade of fire temple
 * (created by Pindharas (nomadic robbers)) Omit the consecutive brackets "))"
 * Corrected
 * One year later, in 1742 "in 1742" is redundant
 * Corrected
 * Features
 * The boi ritual is enthroning "involves the enthroning of the"
 * Done
 * Heritage status
 * Any currency conversion for "Rs.15 million"?
 * Linked Rs. to Indian rupee. In view fluctuating exchange rate giving the figures in any other currency may not be necessary

Thanks for the changes, promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 04:31, 29 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for promoting the article. Nvvchar . 04:33, 29 June 2016 (UTC)